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The Daze of Malice

Your barque blocks the orb which steers my muse; change course, you are an intrusion. Captain Wahn. Intimidation brands you a martyr, mere threats have no place herein. Alter your own path. Skipper Twain. Seems a knot has you both anchored; choking, challenging your journey. Old grudges you have harbored will send you back to your docks on a gurney. words from Urania. Fate obstructs the view when ships align with the moon. Urania smiles. Hidden underwater shelf will cut short the daze of malice.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2018 8:16:00 PM

Very well done, Reason. I see you placed and I hope you got a good placement with this deep meaning poem. I thought Broken Wings' challenge was inspiring to many of her contestants in this contest. By the way, I have at least four or five oak tree poems. And other tree poems as well. How about you?

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2018 10:53:00 PM

Reason, congratulations on your placement.

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2018 11:01:00 AM

Reason, congratulations on your placement in my contest with deep and powerful write, well done !

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/29/2018 2:05:00 PM

Thanks, Constance, I don't do dark often and this is metaphor dark. I'm glad for the placement in your All About Four contest.

James Inman

Date: 4/29/2018 9:23:00 AM

An intense metaphorical write. Sounds much like my daughters when they are fighting (or playing a video game). Great visuals.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/29/2018 2:06:00 PM

Yes, I have two sons and two grandsons which bicker and bite even as I write. Thanks for the comment.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/29/2018 7:43:00 AM

A delightful read. Congrats on your placement, Reason.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/29/2018 2:07:00 PM

Thanks, Line. glad for the read and your reply.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/29/2018 3:24:00 AM

Oh my! Dark and intense! Congratulations on your win. Well done. You express the "malice" brilliantly. :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/29/2018 2:07:00 PM

Enemies are bound to find each other eventually. These two did. Thanks for your interaction here, appreciate your remarks.