The Days of Wine and Roses

The days of wine and roses bliss and scoff.
A lovely Autumn rain,  whilst Paris blooms
with winsome hues. We’re arm in arm. I laugh.
I cradle blushing petals soft and plush.

Your smile could kill, seemed warm back then, as you
plant seeds of promise, slip the ring of thorns
upon its naive-me. Your muscles ripped,
my eyes pop out, so sure in love, am I.

The days of wine and roses riffed and bare.
A dance of slender boots and snowy slope —
oh if back then I'd known how steep, I’d run.
Your devil's breath did warm me to the toes.

The handsome grip (and I’d lose mine) was tight.
We’d throw back vine, make history, forget.
I’d tear my fingernails in love me nots.
The rosy scent was death upon my lips.

The days of wine and roses strangled me.
I’d never see the days of Spring. My youth,
with anguished eyes, did scream with your hot lies,
and now the cold dark soil — it oft does mock.

10/18/2019
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Title chosen: The days of wine and roses

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Date: 11/29/2019 10:28:00 AM
This is even more compelling, more poignant the second tme around! Great write, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading a second time! <3 Kim
Date: 11/13/2019 10:13:00 AM
Oh, this is good Congratutalations Love, Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 11/6/2019 12:31:00 PM
Big Congrats to win top. Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha! <3 Kim
Date: 11/5/2019 6:38:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win, Kim:-) A simply mesmerizing write with striking imagery! Thank you for participating in my contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2019 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! :) Kim
Date: 10/20/2019 2:14:00 PM
this is really great how you included metaphors and your meter is VERY well executed for blank verse form . I sure would place this one if I were judge.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 5:09:00 PM
Very nice of you to say, Andrea! Thank you :) Kim
Date: 10/20/2019 10:57:00 AM
Just gorgeous, Kim. Fantastic write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 5:09:00 PM
Thank you, Dale!
Date: 10/19/2019 9:51:00 PM
Wickedly good, Kim! Heck, not good, but GREAT! See you in the winner's circle with this one! Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 7:29:00 AM
Perhaps! Thank you, dear Gershon!
Date: 10/18/2019 2:38:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is an excellent poem with such wonderful, vivid imagery. I am so glad I dropped by this piece tonight. I love the content of this piece. The days of wine and roses, live in your words. A definite fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2019 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, Mike! Same to you!
Date: 10/18/2019 1:35:00 PM
Hi Kim, a amazing poem is it fact or fiction for it is a wonderful piece of poetry but a sense of complete disappointment permeates throughout your write. A Splendid write! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2019 1:36:00 PM
Fiction
Date: 10/18/2019 10:50:00 AM
Superb! This was amazing Kim. Your poetry always leaves me in awe. I loved every line of this poem. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2019 10:52:00 AM
That means a lot to me, Chris! Thanks so much!
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