The Days of Old

I never will forget the days of old
when having neighbors meant more to us then.
I think that for technology we’ve sold
the sweetness of the way things were back when.

I used to read the tales of Nancy Drew
but couldn’t buy the books since we were poor,
but nearby was a rich girl that we knew.
To borrow books from her, I’d run next door!

We’d borrow other things like sugar and
the butter for the cookies Mom would make.
At Christmas, having neighbors was so grand,
for treats to one another we would take.

We’d talk outside on porches, so laid back,
and I would play with neighbor kids all day.
Conveniences today we do not lack;
Dang cell phones rule, and that’s the modern way.

Feb. 2, 2023
for Sotto Poet's Acquaintance And Neighborhood Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/20/2023 11:51:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your contest win with this incredible poem, Andrea. With my best wishes to you.
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Date: 2/9/2023 8:01:00 AM
"Those were the days my friend, I thought they'd never end." The majority today would say the song was wrong! Some still practice being a "good neighbor" besides State Farm Insurance. lol Nice entry for the contest, Andrea ... good luck! It was fun to catch up on your recent poetry after my period away from poetry soup. Bill
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Date: 2/3/2023 10:00:00 AM
We were better off when we were poorer. Lovely verse.
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Date: 2/2/2023 5:53:00 PM
The days of old created friendships!
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Date: 2/2/2023 3:07:00 PM
Wow Andrea I can see the verandas 'Porches' I can smell the dust, and Feel the sweaty buzz of kids playing Playing playing..Oh we didn't know What we had..' Its so unreal now did Some loonys really ban singing? standing Close to other humans? Stopping picnics I think now the mask was to negate smiles.' It had to be..' There could be no pretextual So called reason (to ban smiling) what a lot Of sad jerks.' As you say in the; U S A.! Enjoyed reading.'
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