Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

The Day You Gently Let Me Go

You knew our love would end in pain
Its sun kissed glow dissolve in rain
Delight would turn into disdain

And so, you gently let me go

You saw the future and you knew
They’d try to tear our hearts in two
what else was there for you to do?

You thought to gently let me go

You knew my heart would someday break
Our love so sweet, but a mistake
With all that seemed to be at stake

You had to gently let me go

You felt the prick of unborn sigh
You held me tight and said a lie
“My love for you will never die”

And yet, you gently let me go

You watched me weep, and scream, and rage
I lay there broken on the stage
Our Play had reached its final page 

And so, you gently let me go

Your love? No longer on display
Your lips? All sealed, no words to say
Our rainbow gone, you live in grey

And mourn the day you let me go

Eileen Manassian

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Paige Hind August 1, 2024 at 12:39 PM I love this! It flowed so beautifully even though it's a tone that's final...wistful thinking...<3

Heather Ober January 2, 2019 at 9:12 AM Wow! I love everything about this one. It's so hard to walk away when you know it's the right thing to do, even though your heart is screaming at you to stay. You capture this particular anguish with such skilled delicacy.

John Hamilton December 18, 2018 at 1:06 PM I enjoyed the style of the triplet then a refrain, repeated, sad theme but like Chris said very lyrical...I like it! Nice to see you back!

Sunlite Wanter December 17, 2018 at 6:34 PM So glad to see one of my favorite poet's name and beautiful poetry.

Paul Callus December 14, 2018 at 1:35 PM True love can ask for sacrifices to be made, Eileen, even heartbreaking ones if need be. Your poem is the fruit of a mellow transition, acceptance, and a memory which will linger on... So lovely to have you back writing beautiful poetry! Hugs // paul

Jerry T Curtis December 5, 2018 at 7:49 PM Excellent Excellent Excellent !!!

Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2018 at 4:47 PM I don’t know if there is a gentle way to let someone go. This is well expressed and Often the one who leaves another feels the sting of their own decision.

Vladislav Raven November 24, 2018 at 2:50 PM Hi Eileen, such an excellent write with such real emotions flowing through the piece. Sometimes love can hurt but if it is true, it is never forgotten. Sometimes one person shall leave the relationship, but if it is best for both then the reason is understood in the end. You write your moments so artistically. You always write from the heart Eileen. A fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Harry Horsman November 21, 2018 at 3:43 PM Wonderful, so glad our paths cross again Eileen, so heartfelt and profound. just love this...

Gordon Mcconnell November 21, 2018 at 8:11 AM Really fine penned piece Eileen, so well crafted indeed, rather enjoyed it though it was sad. Blessings, Gordon

Laura Leiser November 20, 2018 at 6:11 PM Such a sad, yet poignant poem, Eileen. Beautifully written and enjoyed. :) Eileen Manassian November 20, 2018 at 9:20 PM Thank you for your visit, dear Laura. I have been out of the writing game for some time. I'm glad my muse decided to pay me a visit yesterday. :) Hugs

John Lawless November 20, 2018 at 4:09 PM ...it seems that this "letting go" was the ultimate act of love freeing you both Eileen Manassian November 20, 2018 at 9:21 PM That is what the message of the poem is, John. Love has many facets. True love wants the best for the beloved. Thanks for the visit. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2018 at 1:10 PM - A great love never dies, even if the lovers are separated - There may be many reasons why a relationship should be terminated, but it's sad - A beautiful poem, Eileen - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian November 20, 2018 at 9:22 PM Yes, Sunshine...true love never dies. I enjoyed writing this piece and reflecting on this aspect of love. Sending you lots of love.

Tom Cunningham November 20, 2018 at 12:27 PM A sad verse Eileen, very well written. Tom. P.S. Hope your work placement is going well. Eileen Manassian November 20, 2018 at 9:24 PM Thanks for the visit, Tom. It wasn't a work placement. We are helping a sister university in Austria. This university only offers theology as it is a seminary, but there are a few students who want to study education and so faculty from our university are going there to offer intensive courses. :) It was a great experience for me. Thank you for your concern.

Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 11:12 AM This was absolutely beautiful and heart breaking Eileen. There is a song like quality to this albeit a sad song. Really nicely done. Eileen Manassian November 20, 2018 at 11:14 AM Oh...thanks, Chris. Life has its joys and sorrows. We get to write about them. I appreciate the visit. :)