The Day We Met

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I recollect the day we met, my dear
When the air was wintry warm and clear.
The garden was a paradise of perfume,
And many flowers were in bloom.

Daylilies and columbines flourished around the pond
And tall sedge grew here and there and beyond.
Littered everywhere were lovely lotus flowers,
Beneath goldfish and calico swam together for hours.

A small wooden bridge took us to a small bench,
So soothing I heard a waterfall drifting down a trench.
We talked and talked and knew love was there.
I promised I will always be true for I really did care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/22/2023 1:36:00 PM
This is a lovely, melodious write Victor. I enjoyed it! hugs :)
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Date: 1/20/2023 3:21:00 PM
Quite a lovely pen, sentimental and heartfelt.
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Date: 1/17/2023 7:49:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Victor :) - I can feel the love in your lines :) - hugs
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Date: 1/16/2023 1:44:00 AM
And you were always true Victor! Lovely poem from your heart…..with great ryhming….cuddles…Debx
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Date: 1/15/2023 10:16:00 AM
Victor this is so heartfelt and loving. What a fortunate gal she was to have you in that special place you describe my friend. A favorite.
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Date: 1/14/2023 8:13:00 PM
The lovely rendezvous of your first meeting is so lucidly etched in your memory. What a fantastic place for a man and woman to meet, talk and discuss at length about their future plans. Nature's beauty abounds in your verse, dear friend.
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Date: 1/14/2023 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful imagery , I walked with you ever step. The feeling of romance was warm and true. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 1/14/2023 1:46:00 PM
Charming snapshot of divine moments shared with your special love~ thank you for allowing me a glimpse of such personal paradise. Brought back many of my own cherished memories. Blessings.
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Date: 1/14/2023 10:18:00 AM
You set the stage for the meeting amid nature's beauty. Romance can only flourish when love is in the air. Brilliant write, Victor.
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Date: 1/14/2023 9:20:00 AM
What a lovely scene for the beginning of a true romance! I enjoyed this magical verse very much! :)
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Date: 1/14/2023 8:29:00 AM
Creative lines in this romantic work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page., Sara
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Date: 1/14/2023 8:01:00 AM
So romantic! Love this setting! God bless you, dear Victor!
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Date: 1/14/2023 6:26:00 AM
What a priceless recollection expressed in such a sophisticated manner. The way you recall the event makes it sound as if it happened only yesterday.
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Date: 1/14/2023 3:52:00 AM
Oh Victor, this is so beautiful. Yo describe the scene as if it were yesterday, what a precious memory. This is a definite favourite of mine.
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Date: 1/14/2023 3:13:00 AM
You never forget that first encounter Victor and it's a happy memory you cherish. Tom
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