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The Day the Sky Fell

artillery spent battery chickens rising the avian spring ...and now for something completely different, this eighteenth day of May, in the year, two thousand and twenty. *battery - cage used for animal production *artillery - rows and columns of batteries connected in a unit

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2020 2:33:00 PM

Wow! This is really interesting! Hugs...Kim

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/21/2020 12:32:00 PM

Hello Pigeon Tart!! Battery Chickens Rising, eh?? I must certain agree with John Watt's comment below: "Poultry in motion." Enjoyed your Haiku here very much!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/21/2020 12:40:00 PM

Tha k you Gary! Cheers! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 5/21/2020 12:24:00 PM

Oh my Pigeon Tart, Chicken Little is caught in the middle!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/21/2020 12:39:00 PM

Hackles up... "Call me little, one more time..." ;),

John Watt

Date: 5/19/2020 11:51:00 AM

Poultry in motion...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 1:02:00 PM

Don't want to be a sitting duck ;),

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/19/2020 11:43:00 AM

Wow! Proof again that you never chicken out! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 11:51:00 AM

Lol! Legions of African Swallows armed with coconuts are due any minute now. xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/19/2020 8:24:00 AM

Good play on words. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 9:15:00 AM

Thank you Rick! The words, they were begging for it ;), xomo

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/19/2020 7:32:00 AM

Another Great Haiku My Canadian neighbor! Well done my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Mark! Tough for a ku to compete in an open contest, but I do love the challenge. Do you have chickens on your farm? There's talk of repealing laws to allow chickens in town here. I'm tempted, but I'd still probably go pigeons ;),

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/19/2020 7:24:00 AM

Wow! I admire your great way of revealing truth in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 7:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Beata! Blessings to you, have a wonderful day! xomo

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/19/2020 2:54:00 AM

That last line has me terrified. Imagine being in a place where birds rule! Intriguing write, dear.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 7:28:00 AM

Revenge Of The Dodo! Watch out for those African Swallows, coconuts kill more people than sharks ;), Thank you Eileen! Hugs my lovely poetry friend. xomo

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/19/2020 2:10:00 AM

Freedom to all feathered creatures. LOve your haiku,

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Harry! Warm hugs, xomo

Anil Deo

Date: 5/18/2020 8:37:00 PM

brilliant; didactic; very Mo (my Sister in all climes, fair and FOWL). shalom shalOM

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 8:48:00 PM

.. I like that, "Fair and Fowl" <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 8:46:00 PM

Tee hee! Thank you Anil! I know, this one is so obviously a mo poem ;), indeed, a ditty directed directly to the contest sponsor. A smile will be a win. Mo hugs bro! ~x

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/18/2020 8:25:00 PM

I sprang to attention upon reading this one. :) g

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 8:27:00 PM

Did I get your hackles up? ;), xomo!