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The Day The Sky Fell

artillery spent battery chickens rising the avian spring ...and now for something completely different, this eighteenth day of May, in the year, two thousand and twenty. *battery - cage used for animal production *artillery - rows and columns of batteries connected in a unit

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Date: 6/20/2020 2:33:00 PM
Wow! This is really interesting! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 5/26/2020 11:47:00 AM
What fun and such a memorable pen! Thank you for stopping by. Chantelle hugs
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/27/2020 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Chantelle! I can see it in claymation ;), xomo
Date: 5/21/2020 12:32:00 PM
Hello Pigeon Tart!! Battery Chickens Rising, eh?? I must certain agree with John Watt's comment below: "Poultry in motion." Enjoyed your Haiku here very much!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/21/2020 12:40:00 PM
Tha k you Gary! Cheers! xomo
Date: 5/21/2020 12:24:00 PM
Oh my Pigeon Tart, Chicken Little is caught in the middle!!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/21/2020 12:39:00 PM
Hackles up... "Call me little, one more time..." ;),
Date: 5/19/2020 11:51:00 AM
Poultry in motion...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 1:02:00 PM
Don't want to be a sitting duck ;),
Date: 5/19/2020 11:43:00 AM
Wow! Proof again that you never chicken out! Aloha! Rico
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 11:51:00 AM
Lol! Legions of African Swallows armed with coconuts are due any minute now. xomo
Date: 5/19/2020 8:24:00 AM
Good play on words. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Rick! The words, they were begging for it ;), xomo
Date: 5/19/2020 7:32:00 AM
Another Great Haiku My Canadian neighbor! Well done my friend.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Mark! Tough for a ku to compete in an open contest, but I do love the challenge. Do you have chickens on your farm? There's talk of repealing laws to allow chickens in town here. I'm tempted, but I'd still probably go pigeons ;),
Date: 5/19/2020 7:24:00 AM
Wow! I admire your great way of revealing truth in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata! Blessings to you, have a wonderful day! xomo
Date: 5/19/2020 2:54:00 AM
That last line has me terrified. Imagine being in a place where birds rule! Intriguing write, dear.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 7:28:00 AM
Revenge Of The Dodo! Watch out for those African Swallows, coconuts kill more people than sharks ;), Thank you Eileen! Hugs my lovely poetry friend. xomo
Date: 5/19/2020 2:10:00 AM
Freedom to all feathered creatures. LOve your haiku,
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/19/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Harry! Warm hugs, xomo
Date: 5/18/2020 8:37:00 PM
brilliant; didactic; very Mo (my Sister in all climes, fair and FOWL). shalom shalOM
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/18/2020 8:48:00 PM
.. I like that, "Fair and Fowl" <3
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/18/2020 8:46:00 PM
Tee hee! Thank you Anil! I know, this one is so obviously a mo poem ;), indeed, a ditty directed directly to the contest sponsor. A smile will be a win. Mo hugs bro! ~x
Date: 5/18/2020 8:25:00 PM
I sprang to attention upon reading this one. :) g
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/18/2020 8:27:00 PM
Did I get your hackles up? ;), xomo!