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The Day of the Comets - Act 1

An advanced party From many years in the future Visit a planet called earth A most barren of features They ascend a steep hill Like a battle scarred scene As their receivers locate Something unseen They scrape the dirt And uncover a find Something so old From a different time Surveillance over They head back to their ship To set out again Once they re-equip The items they found In particular on that hill With their modern technology They hear a historical chill They sit in angst At the words they hear From a few centuries ago A voice in fear As i stood on the porch Over looking the valley I start to view the comets As i await earths finale To know what happened, please read " The Day of the Comets - Act 2 " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-8.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/24/2009 6:25:00 PM
Very interesting James going to read the next one now. Thank you for your comments earlier. Pam
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:09:00 PM
You've got my curiosity aroused, with this one James. I'm off to see Act 2!!! Smiles, DAS-J
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