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The Day Is Lost

My wallet gone! The day is lost - I plan
A hundred calls. His message comes, I'm floored.
We meet, he brings it - taking no reward.
"Just pay it forward", says the kind, young man.


(...a true story. I asked him why he would not want a 
reward for returning my wallet and the young US Navy 
sailor said "just pay it forward. That's my reward")

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/18/2020 1:46:00 PM Back with my congrats. I truly love your little story you showed us with this poem and your use of enjambment. Login to Reply John Watt Date: 4/18/2020 2:02:00 PM Thanks Andrea! I don't know if you remember this, but you're the one I learned the word 'enjambment' from!

Charles Messina Date: 4/17/2020 1:23:00 PM Great poetry, John. love this..so well done. Congratulations on your placement! Stay safe and be well my dear friend. Charlie Login to Reply John Watt Date: 4/17/2020 8:23:00 PM Charlie, thank you for creating such a wonderful contest at a time in world history when kindness is paramount. Appreciate you stoking the fire and inspiring all those great writes, which I'm looking forward to reading through in days to come. Good job on the judging, also; I really enjoyed reading those two #1 placements. Cheers, my friend (and happy fishing!) ~ John

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/17/2020 11:57:00 AM A wonderful act of kindness recorded here. Congrats, John! Login to Reply John Watt Date: 4/17/2020 12:03:00 PM Thanks for stopping by for a comment, Gershon. Have a great day, my friend.

Indiana Shaw Date: 3/21/2020 3:18:00 AM Years ago, I left my purse with £400 rent money in it, and it was returned, I never forget it, so, the lady who returned it continues to this day to receive blessings from me, far greater than any kind of on the spot forgot reward, it is also my motto when doing anyone a favour, pass the reward on, lovely poem John, credits for sharing . . . : ) Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/22/2020 9:19:00 AM Indy, thank you for sharing this wonderful story. A vivid reminder that not everyone out there is "looking out for #1". And I appreciate how intentional you are in acknowledging the kindness. Hugs/John

Beata Agustin Date: 3/13/2020 12:31:00 AM Thanks for sharing this. It's heartening to hear again that kindness is actually practiced. God bless you. Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/13/2020 1:09:00 AM Beata, always appreciate your kind words. He was a Christian, only wanting to glorify God with his honesty and integrity, and asked me to show the same kindness to another stranger. It was so touching, I had to write about it.

Line Gauthier Date: 3/11/2020 7:03:00 PM Love to hear these stories. Love how you worded this one, John. Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/11/2020 7:40:00 PM Grateful for your kindness about kindness, Line.

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/6/2020 4:21:00 PM This is so inspiring, so glad you shared it, an excellent entry for the contest, John- Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/6/2020 5:12:00 PM Michelle, thank you for taking the time to read and respond. Appreciate you and your words ~ John

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/6/2020 3:38:00 PM A fine story very well told John, a terrific tale! Blessings, Gordon Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/6/2020 4:17:00 PM Thank you very much, Gordon. Always appreciate your kind words ~ John

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2020 8:24:00 PM ahh, I see what you did here. I did same theme, just more general. you provided the EXAMPLE of it. Well done!! Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/6/2020 4:16:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. I imagine there may be a lot of parallel efforts for this contest!

Ilene Bauer Date: 3/5/2020 6:00:00 PM a terrific story, well-told! best of luck in the contest, john... Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/6/2020 4:14:00 PM Thank you so very much, Ilene!

Jan Allison Date: 3/5/2020 4:14:00 PM what a wonderful story John I too wrote on the pay it forward theme:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply John Watt Date: 3/6/2020 4:14:00 PM Ah, sorry to step on your toes, dear Jan. I do that all the time when I try to ballroom dance!