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The Day I Realized I Was In Love

The first time she kissed me was the day when I realized that I was in love When her lips met mine, my heart exploded so did my mind It was as if the heavens and the Earth had combine, There were many people and many sounds but I could only hear one The voice of her heart, with every beat taking my name and only mine Her arms were giving me embrace and there I noticed the beauty of her face Her lips red as a sunset, her face white as a dove, that was the day I fell in love 22 June 2018 A fictional poem For the contest" seven lines of Romantic Heaven" Sponsor " Silent one "

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Reta Pruitt

Date: 8/19/2018 12:47:00 AM

Faraz...Originally expressed and beautiful, really nice.

Karen Da

Date: 8/4/2018 4:13:00 AM

This made me smile. Beautiful work and expressively romantic..

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 7/18/2018 5:58:00 PM

Loverly work Faraz Ajmal !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/6/2018 3:09:00 AM

romantic bliss bring you your victory :') thanks for your drop on my page :) smiles ;') //Olive

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/1/2018 9:43:00 PM

Congrats on your realization. peace n joy

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/1/2018 9:42:00 AM

Truly superb my friend. A fav...

Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2018 8:05:00 PM

Back with big congratulations on your win. . Hugs Eve ~`*

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/27/2018 11:06:00 AM

You captured love in this write beautifully. Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/27/2018 10:07:00 AM

This is such a beautiful, romantic piece that I enjoyed reading, dear Faraz! You are a true romance poet! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/25/2018 11:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful romantic poem in only 7 lines. Well done! :)

Marc Acrich

Date: 6/25/2018 7:03:00 PM

I like it to me, you are a poet begin to get it right then, come more a nd more like an unraveling of your talent but you are off to a good strt but then who am I to comment.if an idea pops up in your head go to your computer that is what poetry is to me an idea , time , love , hate, regret, money , the idea for poem that is why contest are nice

Faraz Ajmal
Date: 6/26/2018 6:50:00 AM

I think that I am getting what you are trying to say, believe me, in order to write about love, ylu don't necessarily have to be in love, you only required some good imaginations

Mansi Sharma

Date: 6/25/2018 3:06:00 PM

Romantic to the core! Loved it! Congratulations! :)

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 7:00:00 AM

We never forget that feeling Faraz.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2018 7:58:00 PM

A lovely poem that describes the soul shaking bliss that love's euphoria shares. Beautifully written Faraz! : )

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 6/24/2018 6:46:00 PM

I wish you well in the contest. True to heart feelings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2018 3:36:00 PM

Gorgeous poetry. And of course, it has to be fictional just for your age!!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/24/2018 2:46:00 PM

Besma , is so right love and emotion that can have so many levels , but also very painful.. love the poem .. good luck in the contest .

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/24/2018 10:39:00 AM

The day you in love fell was the day of a poet's birth! Love is one of life's beauties that stirs every soul's heart and mind.. A beautiful write! The best of luck in the contest Faraz. Stay safe and blessed.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2018 8:07:00 AM

You are a romantic soul! You made superb use of your seven lines.