The Day I Met You

The day i met you i believed in love again
The day i met you i wanted to be more than friends
The day i met you my heart beat out of my chest
The day i met you I knew you were better than the rest
The day i met you i shed a tear
The day i met you i felt better than i had for so many years
The day i met you my soul raised to the sky
The day i met you i had never felt so alive
The day i met you i said id take a bullet for you
The day i met you i said id do whatever i had to do
The day i met you it relieved all my pain
The day i met you i felt like dancing in the rain
The day i met you i knew i would live on
The day i met you i thought you could do no wrong
The day i met you i fell in love with your smile
The day i met you i felt i could run for miles
The day i met you i broke thru my cage
The day i met you i felt no more feelings of rage
The day i met you i looked to the stars
The day i met you i knew i would have to raise the bar
The day i met you i felt like a child
The day i met you my heart ran wild
The day i met you my hatred was washed away
The day i met you i looked forward for the next day
The day i met you i forgot what i had done
The day i met you i wanted to be your only one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/10/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 7/10/2010 8:50:00 AM
It's amazing how you can feel this much toward a person in a day. I really enjoyed reading this. I congratulate you for being featured and have fun alright? Take care =) Lizann.
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:30:00 AM
congrats on the feature poem!
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Coty. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:09:00 AM
Congrats Coty, oh, what a wonderful love poem, I love this piece, it is like the way i feel. congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:21:00 AM
Congrats Coty on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to share with us all.. taking after Nana.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:58:00 AM
Coty a fabulous poem aobut love and emotion. Many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/4/2010 9:55:00 PM
Is this love at first sight? Emotion, poured out. Enjoy the penning.
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Date: 6/29/2010 4:18:00 PM
Cool write Coty ..welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. enjoyed ready a creative write from u.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:04:00 AM
This is an excellent poem of live. It's also a wonderful list poem with a loving message. It's like love at first sight. The rhyming pattern flows very well. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Coty. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 12:10:00 AM
Thanks I just started writing poetry 2 weeks ago and this is my second.
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Date: 6/27/2010 11:03:00 PM
Love at first sight is so adorable lol,,, sweet write...P.D.
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