The Day I Died

                                       I met you
                                         on that
                                           warm
                                          summer
                          evening, and knew in an instant
                          that we were meant to be. Your
                             smile lit the twilight shaming
                                         the moon,
                                           as our
                                          laughter
                                          filled the
                                       warm breeze.
                                     I remember our
                            first kiss in the moonlight, so
                       hesitant and real.  The taste of your
                    gentle sweet lips, leaving me yearning for
                   more.  We spent each precious moment of
                 your vacation together,  you visiting me while
                    I worked, and long walks on the beach at
                   day's end. The soft sand cool and alive, as
                    with each step,   we left fading reminders
                    of every passing moment,  and the waves
                    tickled our ankles in never  ending  games
                    of tag.   Our fingers entwined in  romantic
                    intention,   both of us lost  in our world of
         dreams, hope for the future and desire for one another.
    Our only thoughts as each day pressed on were of each other.
For three beautiful, care filled summers we spent our days together,

but in between were the lonely winters, cold and without you.  I went
        to see you one fall, but you seemed hesitant to be with me.
              I didn't understand.  I reread each letter you sent with
                               thoughts that I had done something
                                 wrong.  You never gave me one clue,
                                    each note ending with, "Love Forever."
                                      We still talked on the phone before
                                        we went to sleep and you would tell
                                          me how you missed me, but I could
                                            tell things had changed between us.
                                  The last summer we spent together you seemed
                                        to be somewhere else.  Your kisses were few
                                             and seemed indifferent, ice on a summer
                                                    day.   I knew our time together was
                                                          ending and, sweet, our dreams
                                                                       were fading away.
                                                                            You called me
                                                                                on the day
                                                                                    you left
                                                                                         and
                                                                                        told me
                                                                    you were engaged to someone
                                                                       else.  I heard your pain with
                                                                        each sound you uttered on 
                                                                                                the
                                                                                             sweltering
                                                                                                  sunny
                                                                                                   tearful
                                                                                                      day
                                                                                                     I died.


02/10/16

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Date: 5/7/2016 4:32:00 PM
James, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:58:00 PM
James, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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James Inman
Date: 3/20/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you PD, love your visits.
Date: 3/3/2016 11:12:00 AM
James, totally W O N D E R F U L L, beautifully penned and I am loving it 7~
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James Inman
Date: 3/3/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thanks BW. I appreciate your words.
Date: 2/16/2016 5:58:00 PM
Wow the shape is amazing. I enjoyed every line and my heart broke with yours. SuZ
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James Inman
Date: 2/16/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thanks for the wonderful comment, Suzanne.
Date: 2/11/2016 4:06:00 PM
wow, the shaping you did is AMAZING. and I have no idea what this challenge implies but I bet Justin loves your take!! I wish I had time to read any other new works you have but it's after 3 now and I have to get home. seeing my daughter in law in just three hours!!
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Date: 2/11/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm sure you're excited. Have fun.
Date: 2/10/2016 1:03:00 PM
- A wonderful poem James, with emotion in your description of grief and tears - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Inman
Date: 2/10/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you for reading it Anne-Lise.
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