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The Day Cosmos Was Formed

A story I will relate to you, my dearest friends, today
A story that was, is, and always would remain true 
For that try this narration to your children to convey:
 
Once upon a time, when nothing but the Chaos was existing, 
The Lord of spiritual consciousness was sitting peacefully 
On His blissful throne 
Ceaselessly contemplating upon His equilibrium
T’ was the era of no moon, no sun, no stars, no earth, 
No oceans, no rivers,
Just a motionless, timeless and deathless entity He was
Happy with His existence.  

Suddenly, the thought of sacred motion was felt deep down
In His essence
Seeking the chaos to be stirred from its core outwardly
Consequently, separating the light from the darkness and all
The other elements that constitute the Cosmos
Thus giving birth immediately to old mighty time.

When Time: This wizard of celestial art found himself alive
His expert hands stretched in advance, wanting to create
For that the plastic energy he took, that was everywhere around
And skillfully and patiently the Cosmos carved according to
The Logos
Creating thus, the nebulae, the galaxies, the stars, and all 
The other planets.

Then God looked at times creation and marveled with its beauty
But as there was no life to be seen in all of this formation
God thought that holy it would be to inhabit every place
For that out of himself cut billions of blazing souls
Which like shooting stars he sent downwards to animate 
The cosmos.

That was the way, my dearest friend, the souls were beamed to 
Manifestation’s cosmic sphere
Bringing with them the sacred principles to denser forms of life,
By radiating their luminosity to reality’s lower planes 
So, as they passed from the spiritual, the mental, and the astral
Finally materialized, themselves on the physical solid plane
Where life began on earth, with God’s will and grace!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
       12 June 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 12:25 PM
A thought provoking story Demetrios my friend. You are a great philosopher enjoyed reading this and have faved it so I can read it again. Well penned my friend. If you go to Alexis' poeme Bye Bye, you will see my comment to her as to why I have been so quiet on soup. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
Trifiatis Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 1:15 PM
I am really so sorry to hear of your predicament, my dearest friend, Jennifer. I pray that all goes well and you to be walking and running in no time. God bless you. I will go to my church tomorrow to pray and light a candle for your health. Thank you for visiting and commenting. You ought to take it easy. Commenting should be the last thing in your mind for now. Hugs xxx
Kannan Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 9:35 AM
That sounds so interesting. I always love to read these kind of stories, where the science and philosophy play a major role. Here they altogether penned a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing...
Trifiatis Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Supraja, my dearest friend, Thank you for your lovely visit and comment. Hugs xxx and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Enjoyed reading your story, Demetrios. You always make everyone think.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Glad you did, my dearest friend, Vijay. It is the philosopher's duty to make everyone think. Thank you very much for your precious visit and comment.
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Even scientists cannot explain it and many have reached the conclusion that it was miraculous not being able to provide an alternative to the wonders of creation. Enjoy your weekend Demetrios. Tom
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June 12, 2021 at 2:44 AM
My dearest friend, Tom, it is true what you say but are scientists the most qualified people to explain God's doing? They make hypotheses, the same right though has anyone among us, especially the poet! Thank you for your lovely visit a d comment. Enjoy your weekend. Blessings.
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