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A story I will relate to you, my dearest friends, today A story that was, is, and always would remain true For that try this narration to your children to convey: Once upon a time, when nothing but the Chaos was existing, The Lord of spiritual consciousness was sitting peacefully On His blissful throne Ceaselessly contemplating upon His equilibrium T’ was the era of no moon, no sun, no stars, no earth, No oceans, no rivers, Just a motionless, timeless and deathless entity He was Happy with His existence. Suddenly, the thought of sacred motion was felt deep down In His essence Seeking the chaos to be stirred from its core outwardly Consequently, separating the light from the darkness and all The other elements that constitute the Cosmos Thus giving birth immediately to old mighty time. When Time: This wizard of celestial art found himself alive His expert hands stretched in advance, wanting to create For that the plastic energy he took, that was everywhere around And skillfully and patiently the Cosmos carved according to The Logos Creating thus, the nebulae, the galaxies, the stars, and all The other planets. Then God looked at times creation and marveled with its beauty But as there was no life to be seen in all of this formation God thought that holy it would be to inhabit every place For that out of himself cut billions of blazing souls Which like shooting stars he sent downwards to animate The cosmos. That was the way, my dearest friend, the souls were beamed to Manifestation’s cosmic sphere Bringing with them the sacred principles to denser forms of life, By radiating their luminosity to reality’s lower planes So, as they passed from the spiritual, the mental, and the astral Finally materialized, themselves on the physical solid plane Where life began on earth, with God’s will and grace! © Demetrios Trifiatis 12 June 2021

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Date: 6/13/2021 12:25:00 PM
A thought provoking story Demetrios my friend. You are a great philosopher enjoyed reading this and have faved it so I can read it again. Well penned my friend. If you go to Alexis' poeme Bye Bye, you will see my comment to her as to why I have been so quiet on soup. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
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Date: 6/13/2021 1:15:00 PM
I am really so sorry to hear of your predicament, my dearest friend, Jennifer. I pray that all goes well and you to be walking and running in no time. God bless you. I will go to my church tomorrow to pray and light a candle for your health. Thank you for visiting and commenting. You ought to take it easy. Commenting should be the last thing in your mind for now. Hugs xxx
Date: 6/12/2021 9:35:00 AM
That sounds so interesting. I always love to read these kind of stories, where the science and philosophy play a major role. Here they altogether penned a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 6/12/2021 2:46:00 PM
Supraja, my dearest friend, Thank you for your lovely visit and comment. Hugs xxx and blessings.
Date: 6/12/2021 4:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your story, Demetrios. You always make everyone think.
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Date: 6/12/2021 6:28:00 AM
Glad you did, my dearest friend, Vijay. It is the philosopher's duty to make everyone think. Thank you very much for your precious visit and comment.
Date: 6/12/2021 2:10:00 AM
Even scientists cannot explain it and many have reached the conclusion that it was miraculous not being able to provide an alternative to the wonders of creation. Enjoy your weekend Demetrios. Tom
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Date: 6/12/2021 2:44:00 AM
My dearest friend, Tom, it is true what you say but are scientists the most qualified people to explain God's doing? They make hypotheses, the same right though has anyone among us, especially the poet! Thank you for your lovely visit a d comment. Enjoy your weekend. Blessings.

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