Chris Green Poet Rhyme

The Dawning of Love

The dawning of love 

 You whispered your secrets
on breezes of starlight
of moonbeam collections
in night sky desire

Those twinkling phrases
beyond the horizon
which once held the sunset
in blistery fire

Beneath every pine tree
found evergreen wishes
with snow dressing branches
long winters to show

And springtime petunias
bloom fresh for the season
soft feathery visions
you want me to know

That here as we’re lying
this hillside of splendor
while counting the diamonds
a’ shine up above

Each sunrise of morning
a new days beginning
asleep in my arms is
the dawning of love

Good night Soupers
Thank you to everyone who has been so very kind to me

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 4:58 AM - Sigh .... this was beautiful, Chris - a large 7 and even larger hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 19, 2017 at 2:02 PM you are a fine melody, chris... this sings, wow.. huggs

Juli- Michelle March 17, 2017 at 9:26 AM Such a beautiful poem, it's like I'm watching two young teens skipping off into the wild together. I love this write, Chris. Love, Juli-Michelle

Joanna Daniel March 16, 2017 at 10:16 AM Hi Chris, this is beautiful poetry once again:) a 7:) hope you're doing well, long time, no see? Where are you?

Lynn Marie March 15, 2017 at 11:35 PM ...back to re-read this gem. a fave, 7+ i had the same thoughts as Charlie below me :-) be well...goodnight.:-) many blessings to you, lynn

Holly Bohto March 15, 2017 at 10:01 PM Beautifully Composed Piece Chris Green.

Charlie Smith March 15, 2017 at 12:20 PM Came back wondering if you're ok. I miss my daily goodnight poem...

Connie Marcum Wong March 13, 2017 at 9:26 PM Chris, your lyrical lines simply sing and leave such beautiful images in my mind of a perfect world in synergy, if even for a moment. Beautiful! 7 ; )

John Hamilton March 13, 2017 at 7:01 PM Beautiful writing as always Chris, sounds like you're saying goodbye at the end. You're not leaving are you? Noticed you didn't post anything today. Take care!

Elizabeth Kinch March 13, 2017 at 4:40 AM So beautiful, this has to go in my favourites so I can read time after time.

Frederic Parker March 11, 2017 at 4:41 PM You are a true romantic my poetic friend

Lisa Ricci March 11, 2017 at 7:50 AM Good Morning Chris. Such the romantic in many ways and I'm not referring to the love of man and woman. The words and fantasy expand. Read back your words and you will see. Well done throughout. Have a wonderful day.

Darren White March 11, 2017 at 12:20 AM You're my wonderful friend, just have a good night and see you soon!

Sara Ella March 10, 2017 at 11:03 PM Lovely poem Chris <3

Tim Smith March 10, 2017 at 8:03 PM Have a quality weekend and don't listen to the haters...all they possess are ego and jealousy.

Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:40 PM All of your poetry is beautiful, Chris, and this is no exception. I love your "good night" poems and look for them. Sleep tight, sweet dreams.

Lynn Marie March 10, 2017 at 6:11 PM A lovely poem of hope for what tomorrow may bring and gratitude for the gifts of today :-) Such heart and love expressed graciously within the comfort of nature's beauty. Breathtaking. many blessings to you :-) lynn xxx

Heidi Sands March 10, 2017 at 6:00 PM This is so beautiful Chris. Another favorite. Good night.

Charmaine Chircop March 10, 2017 at 5:59 PM Such a beauty this is -Asleep in my arms is the dawning of love-Sigh.. A fave from the islander : )