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The Dawning of Love

The dawning of love You whispered your secrets on breezes of starlight of moonbeam collections in night sky desire Those twinkling phrases beyond the horizon which once held the sunset in blistery fire Beneath every pine tree found evergreen wishes with snow dressing branches long winters to show And springtime petunias bloom fresh for the season soft feathery visions you want me to know That here as we’re lying this hillside of splendor while counting the diamonds a’ shine up above Each sunrise of morning a new days beginning asleep in my arms is the dawning of love Good night Soupers Thank you to everyone who has been so very kind to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/20/2017 4:58:00 AM
- Sigh .... this was beautiful, Chris - a large 7 and even larger hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2017 2:02:00 PM
you are a fine melody, chris... this sings, wow.. huggs
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:26:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, it's like I'm watching two young teens skipping off into the wild together. I love this write, Chris. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:16:00 AM
Hi Chris, this is beautiful poetry once again:) a 7:) hope you're doing well, long time, no see? Where are you?
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Date: 3/15/2017 11:35:00 PM
...back to re-read this gem. a fave, 7+ i had the same thoughts as Charlie below me :-) be well...goodnight.:-) many blessings to you, lynn
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Date: 3/15/2017 10:01:00 PM
Beautifully Composed Piece Chris Green.
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Date: 3/15/2017 12:20:00 PM
Came back wondering if you're ok. I miss my daily goodnight poem...
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:26:00 PM
Chris, your lyrical lines simply sing and leave such beautiful images in my mind of a perfect world in synergy, if even for a moment. Beautiful! 7 ; )
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:01:00 PM
Beautiful writing as always Chris, sounds like you're saying goodbye at the end. You're not leaving are you? Noticed you didn't post anything today. Take care!
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:40:00 AM
So beautiful, this has to go in my favourites so I can read time after time.
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Date: 3/11/2017 4:41:00 PM
You are a true romantic my poetic friend
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Date: 3/11/2017 7:50:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. Such the romantic in many ways and I'm not referring to the love of man and woman. The words and fantasy expand. Read back your words and you will see. Well done throughout. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 3/11/2017 12:20:00 AM
You're my wonderful friend, just have a good night and see you soon!
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Date: 3/10/2017 11:03:00 PM
Lovely poem Chris <3
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Date: 3/10/2017 8:03:00 PM
Have a quality weekend and don't listen to the haters...all they possess are ego and jealousy.
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Date: 3/10/2017 6:40:00 PM
All of your poetry is beautiful, Chris, and this is no exception. I love your "good night" poems and look for them. Sleep tight, sweet dreams.
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Date: 3/10/2017 6:11:00 PM
A lovely poem of hope for what tomorrow may bring and gratitude for the gifts of today :-) Such heart and love expressed graciously within the comfort of nature's beauty. Breathtaking. many blessings to you :-) lynn xxx
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Date: 3/10/2017 6:00:00 PM
This is so beautiful Chris. Another favorite. Good night.
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Date: 3/10/2017 5:59:00 PM
Such a beauty this is -Asleep in my arms is the dawning of love-Sigh.. A fave from the islander : )
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