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The Darkness Revales

The darkness reveals Shadows on the wall There are two shadows The first shadow seen A hallway with stairs Then a skeleton Staring at the darkness In the hallway on the bottom step A cat lays down stretches On the fourth step up Another cat rests At the glass door stands A skeleton staring out At the top of the stairs Behind him a cat laying While the skeleton stares Out the window pane

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/20/2023 1:34:00 PM

I enjoyed your write/story. Have a great weekend writing away..........

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2023 11:11:00 AM

Hello Paula, Thank you for the lovely comment. I will enjoy writing away. Hugs. /Darlene\

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/16/2023 3:32:00 PM

Good imagism wtitten Darlene. Another one Fav Good night my friend

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2023 11:12:00 AM

Hello Maria, Hi! thank you for the fav. I hope you had a good evening. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene

Bill Baker

Date: 10/14/2023 2:02:00 PM

Good Imagism poetry, Darlene. Good title, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/14/2023 6:07:00 PM

Hello Bill my poet friend thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my poet friend. /Darlene\

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/14/2023 1:01:00 PM

A great scary poem with lots of imagery Darlene. The skeletons sound quite frightening. I have a very vivid imagination at times and shadows turn into lots of horrible things so I can relate to this poem. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Bless you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/14/2023 6:05:00 PM

Hello Christina, The skeleton is scary looking out the window pane. My imagination see things in the shadows and the clouds. My imaginations gives me ideas for poetry. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene\

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2023 3:24:00 PM

Wow! A powerhouse of scary imagery! Well done!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/14/2023 5:59:00 PM

Hello Kim, Yes it is. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs./Darlene

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/6/2023 11:27:00 AM

This is a good one for Halloween which is coming up fast. Enjoyed your poem. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2023 11:52:00 AM

Hello Phyllis, Thank you Phyllis. Thank you. The Shadow on the wall does look spooky. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you. Love, /Darlene\