Jeremy Siedlecki Poet Haiku

The Darkest Rain

The Darkest Rain

BIRTH

the dawn of the sun
flourishing of cells begun
birthing decadence

FIRST STEP

one innovation
persuading the rest of feet
laziness prevails

PUBERTY
metamorphosis
strength divided  by deceit
long arm of the law

REBELLION

growing civil unrest
the mass desecration of war
eminent demise

DESTINY

timeless prophecy
lethal black poisonous skies
death falling like rain

By: Jeremy Siedlecki


this poem is designed as a scale between
the lifetime of a man and the length of
mankinds existence

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Sara Kendrick February 6, 2011 at 4:27 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 11:03 PM Congratulations on your win with thes fine haiku poem entrie.

Carolyn Devonshire January 20, 2011 at 9:13 AM Congratulations on your success with this awesome haiku series, Jeremy. I do like the way you reflect on man's journey through this earth in chronological order. Brilliant images! Love, Carolyn

The Situation January 18, 2011 at 7:25 PM congradulations on your win. T. H.

Caryl Muzzey January 18, 2011 at 1:21 PM Very creative entry for the contest. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. Caryl

Andrea Dietrich January 17, 2011 at 7:20 PM Destiny was my favorite in the series, reminding me of the route I took with this challenge too. Congrats on your great win, Jeremy. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta January 17, 2011 at 2:18 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, jeremy

James Fraser January 17, 2011 at 12:16 PM Congrats Jeremy on your win in Skat's contest....:)

Audrey Haick January 17, 2011 at 11:06 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2011 at 5:45 AM Congrats Jeremy on your fantastic win in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry .. so vibrant and intense... enjoy your top ten success with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 5:35 AM Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Jeremy sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels January 17, 2011 at 3:46 AM Jeremy each haiku has it's own identity and yet they all fit perfectly into the scheme of things.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest :) Wilma

Kash Poet January 17, 2011 at 2:46 AM Excellent!Congrats on your big win jeremy!

Skat A January 16, 2011 at 9:27 PM Congratulations, Jermy !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 8:29 PM Jeremy, yours is a bit like mine!! I am viewing different entries tonight before posting my own trio. I see you are on my wavelength. I wish you well in the contest. LUv, andrea

Stephen Parker January 14, 2011 at 7:57 PM You aptly describe the cause and effect in each stanza. A well thought-out poem!

Dr.Ram Mehta January 14, 2011 at 4:34 PM beautiful images you have created of the dark raIN, jeremy

Michael J. Falotico January 14, 2011 at 4:16 PM I agree with the lovely P.D excellent work done here...

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2011 at 4:00 PM wow! Jermy, if this is for the contest,, its super awesome.. enjoyed eachone,..p.d.