The Darkest Rain

The Darkest Rain

BIRTH

the dawn of the sun
flourishing of cells begun
birthing decadence

FIRST STEP

one innovation
persuading the rest of feet
laziness prevails

PUBERTY
metamorphosis
strength divided  by deceit
long arm of the law

REBELLION

growing civil unrest
the mass desecration of war
eminent demise

DESTINY

timeless prophecy
lethal black poisonous skies
death falling like rain

By: Jeremy Siedlecki


this poem is designed as a scale between
the lifetime of a man and the length of
mankinds existence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/6/2011 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with thes fine haiku poem entrie.
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Date: 1/20/2011 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your success with this awesome haiku series, Jeremy. I do like the way you reflect on man's journey through this earth in chronological order. Brilliant images! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:25:00 PM
congradulations on your win. T. H.
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:21:00 PM
Very creative entry for the contest. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:20:00 PM
Destiny was my favorite in the series, reminding me of the route I took with this challenge too. Congrats on your great win, Jeremy. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, jeremy
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congrats Jeremy on your win in Skat's contest....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congrats Jeremy on your fantastic win in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry .. so vibrant and intense... enjoy your top ten success with luv..
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Jeremy sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:46:00 AM
Jeremy each haiku has it's own identity and yet they all fit perfectly into the scheme of things.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest :) Wilma
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:46:00 AM
Excellent!Congrats on your big win jeremy!
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Jermy !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:29:00 PM
Jeremy, yours is a bit like mine!! I am viewing different entries tonight before posting my own trio. I see you are on my wavelength. I wish you well in the contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:57:00 PM
You aptly describe the cause and effect in each stanza. A well thought-out poem!
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:34:00 PM
beautiful images you have created of the dark raIN, jeremy
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:16:00 PM
I agree with the lovely P.D excellent work done here...
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:00:00 PM
wow! Jermy, if this is for the contest,, its super awesome.. enjoyed eachone,..p.d.
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