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The Darkest Hour

In the darkest hour of night, glaring at the moon, I stood up cold and tired, in my small and simple room. The leaves were flying on the whistling wind, tormenting birds, while I just grinned. Out in the distance, a pair of lights. A car approached and lit the night. I watched it closely as it came this way, and parked beside the moon lit bay. As flashlights aimed at my front door, I felt a fear not felt before. Two men were walking towards the house, I remained still, quiet as a mouse. And then the knock on my front door, I felt the fear grow even more. Should I go answer or should I stay, and hope and pray, they go away. The knock grew louder and then a voice, “we know you’re there, you have no choice”. I swung the door open so slight, and there they stood, two men in white. Of course I knew why they were here, Too tired to run, too tired to fight. I hung my head in quiet despair, as I was taken in the night. The halls were dark, my room was bright, In this asylum near the sea. The tall guard spoke and said good night, he locked the door and took the key. The memories stamped inside my brain, bring out my tears, my fears, my pain. Remembering childhood friends I made, who’s faces now begin to fade. Now as I long to go to sleep, and hope to dream of days gone by. I still remember, remember well, the days of laughter, that fail to die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 12:18:00 AM
GABRIEL, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Gabriel Magno
Date: 11/10/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Linda. Life can perpetuate one to reveal the darkness in one's life.
Date: 3/15/2015 4:16:00 PM
Gabriel:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Gabriel Magno
Date: 3/24/2015 2:48:00 PM
where is soup's Home Page where my poem is listed? Thanks... Gabriel
Date: 2/21/2015 8:35:00 PM
Gabriel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/19/2015 5:38:00 PM
Gabriel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Gabriel Magno
Date: 2/19/2015 9:56:00 PM
I'm an entertainer. I've performed in Las Vegas for 19 years, but now I'm back in Orange, CA. Living in Vegas was like living in a bowl. Completely surrounded by mountains you had to drive over to go somewhere not close by. I wrote some monologues and studied acting for a while, but my true passion is music and entertaining. And you?
Date: 2/19/2015 2:59:00 PM
This is a very well written poem, Gabriel, with an intriguing story line. A 7 from me.
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