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The Dark Side of Love

She was the nadir of affection like a scorned lover, hell-bent on revenge. She was still like a fresh flower, a sight for sore eyes. David was told she was once jilted by the beau of the town, now hell-bent to wreak havoc on men who unknowingly felt her black spider's charm. He was not known to her; he was not introduced. So, it was easy to ignore her, despite the warnings of his soul. For did not his heartbeat faster? And adrenal flow in quantities above the norm? Yet he remained aloof, played hard to get, knowing that was the way to beat her down. He had no magic or dreams to weave, no moon dust, mystic herbs or love potions, only his determination and wily will. For they were as alike as two mountain peaks covered with hard white snow and tricky paths, dangerous slopes and precipitating avalanches. Perhaps the predator savoured more the chase. She began to notice, and David was yearning more. Until the day arrived when they looked into each other's eyes and knew the outcome of the game. Gone was the last speck of hope, the shred of possibility, the promise of a new love loomed like a giant glacier and the dice were cast. The deadly demons in them were loose. Idyllic days passed sensuously by a farce of fervour. He had to save himself for her clutches could hurt, claws that could cut deep within the soul. So, like the knave he was, he slinked away left her to her own devices and saved his pride. She was not easy to forget, he dreamt of her often, nor was it easy to forgive himself, especially when he heard the news that she had killed herself. 23 September 2022 ONE FROM THE DARK SIDE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless

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Date: 10/4/2022 2:26:00 AM
Love gone wrong, dark and sad....Delice
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Date: 9/29/2022 12:50:00 AM
Love to so many, different ways to express. A sad tale..
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Date: 9/26/2022 2:26:00 PM
An amazingly well written narrative, Victor ~ dark, so apt for the contest, should place high, good luck
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Date: 9/25/2022 3:06:00 AM
A very surprising ending Victor, I enjoyed the read from start to end. Best wishes… Belle
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Date: 9/24/2022 9:43:00 PM
oh wow, what an ending!! VERY dark one . Good to see you entering contests now, Victor.
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Date: 9/24/2022 6:41:00 PM
Suspenseful poem. Good story telling in verse.
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Date: 9/24/2022 7:57:00 AM
Wonderful work you penned, Victor. This story will stick to the memory because of the beautiful images you used to describe love and a terrible aftertaste of regret. I wish you good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2022 2:48:00 AM
This is terribly sad. Love can heal, and often it hurts and scars, but the saddest reality is that sometimes it totally destroys. This is such a sad poem, but amazingly written poem Victor.
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:47:00 PM
Love and bitter regret, expressed through your fine imagery, make this tale memorable. Great writing. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:13:00 PM
A very sad ending to this story of love, he toyed with her heart and once more she felt jilted, WEll penned Victor
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Date: 9/23/2022 1:05:00 PM
... a terribly sad ending, Victor ... great written ... but so dark and sad ... life has both bright and dark sides ... that's a fact - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 9/23/2022 1:45:00 PM
The contest requires dark poem.
Date: 9/23/2022 12:37:00 PM
Whoa~!! You're writing some here lately with a bit of a turn at the end. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/23/2022 12:16:00 PM
Victor sucha schocking ending. Sin brings punishment this is the example of. Well written my friend...
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Date: 9/23/2022 10:24:00 AM
Quite a dark verse Victor hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2022 8:45:00 AM
Wow! There are those that play the dark side, never letting love’s vulnerabilities show. The dance of fire hurts many, some are children without married parents. To only seek the pleasures without commitment are dangerous. Loved the writing, my friend!
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:30:00 AM
Love sometimes takes a turn. Poignant story, Victor, and a sad ending. But, that is the view from the dark side. Best to you.
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Date: 9/23/2022 3:51:00 AM
What a tragic tale ! Everyday you come up with intriguing stories of romance ! Your stock of romantic poems never seem to exhaust ! Keep going dear poet friend .....
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Date: 9/23/2022 3:09:00 AM
Oh my Victor what a poem….it was amazing and sad at the end! Master of Romance you are!! Debx
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