The Dark Side of Love

She was the nadir of affection
like a scorned lover, hell-bent on revenge.
She was still like a fresh flower, a sight for sore eyes.
David was told she was once jilted
by the beau of the town,
now hell-bent to wreak havoc on men
who unknowingly felt her black spider's charm.
 
He was not known to her; he was not introduced.
So, it was easy to ignore her, despite the warnings
of his soul.  For did not his heartbeat faster?
And adrenal flow in quantities above the norm?
Yet he remained aloof, played hard to get,
knowing that was the way to beat her down.
 
He had no magic or dreams to weave,
no moon dust, mystic herbs or love potions,
only his determination and wily will.
For they were as alike as two mountain peaks
covered with hard white snow and tricky paths,
dangerous slopes and precipitating avalanches.
 
Perhaps the predator savoured more the chase.
She began to notice, and David was yearning more.
Until the day arrived when they looked into
each other's eyes and knew the outcome of the game.
Gone was the last speck of hope, 
the shred of possibility, the promise of a new love
loomed like a giant glacier and the dice were cast.
 
The deadly demons in them were loose.
Idyllic days passed sensuously by a farce of fervour.
He had to save himself for her clutches could hurt,
claws that could cut deep within the soul.
So, like the knave he was, he slinked away
left her to her own devices and saved his pride.
She was not easy to forget, he dreamt of her often,
nor was it easy to forgive himself, especially when
he heard the news that she had killed herself.


23 September 2022
ONE FROM THE DARK SIDE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Skelly Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Love gone wrong, dark and sad....Delice
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 12:50 AM
Love to so many, different ways to express. A sad tale..
Seeker Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 2:26 PM
An amazingly well written narrative, Victor ~ dark, so apt for the contest, should place high, good luck
Edmonds  Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 3:06 AM
A very surprising ending Victor, I enjoyed the read from start to end. Best wishes… Belle
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:43 PM
oh wow, what an ending!! VERY dark one . Good to see you entering contests now, Victor.
Bayles Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Suspenseful poem. Good story telling in verse.
Poet Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Wonderful work you penned, Victor. This story will stick to the memory because of the beautiful images you used to describe love and a terrible aftertaste of regret. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 2:48 AM
This is terribly sad. Love can heal, and often it hurts and scars, but the saddest reality is that sometimes it totally destroys. This is such a sad poem, but amazingly written poem Victor.
Buehler Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:47 PM
Love and bitter regret, expressed through your fine imagery, make this tale memorable. Great writing. Good luck in the contest! :)
May Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:13 PM
A very sad ending to this story of love, he toyed with her heart and once more she felt jilted, WEll penned Victor
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 1:05 PM
... a terribly sad ending, Victor ... great written ... but so dark and sad ... life has both bright and dark sides ... that's a fact - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 1:45 PM
The contest requires dark poem.
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Whoa~!! You're writing some here lately with a bit of a turn at the end. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
Tor Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Victor sucha schocking ending. Sin brings punishment this is the example of. Well written my friend...
Cunningham Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Quite a dark verse Victor hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Wow! There are those that play the dark side, never letting love’s vulnerabilities show. The dance of fire hurts many, some are children without married parents. To only seek the pleasures without commitment are dangerous. Loved the writing, my friend!
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:30 AM
Love sometimes takes a turn. Poignant story, Victor, and a sad ending. But, that is the view from the dark side. Best to you.
George Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:51 AM
What a tragic tale ! Everyday you come up with intriguing stories of romance ! Your stock of romantic poems never seem to exhaust ! Keep going dear poet friend .....
M  Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:09 AM
Oh my Victor what a poem….it was amazing and sad at the end! Master of Romance you are!! Debx
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