The Dark Side

Every day I awake,
Ready for my heart to quake.

Ready to throw my life away,
For sure I wished not to stay

They pulled at my hair,
Tugged at my chair

They called me a freak,
This made me feel weak.

Wishing not to care,
For none of this was fair

I pushed the blade against my wrist,
Willing for it to slide and pull away the tide…

Wait…

But inside,
I could feel the change of the tide

With bruises and damage,
I could not manage

As I fear their hunting me,
I’m afraid of what I’ll turn to be

I know what I am capable of…

With the fire burning inside,
I could feel myself slipping to the dark side

No one could hear my aguish or despair,
Forever I will not care.

Cutting myself off from the world… 

I was careless, until I saw you,
I thought you were true.

Then you used me, 
It felt like you were abusing me.

I now would never care,
For no one would dare.

What you did to me,
No one could see

With firing rage…

I fell and slipped to the dark side, 
And now I stay there 

With no despair, 
For no one had any care 

And now you all are here,
You shall scream in fear

You all pulled at my hair,
You all kicked at my chair

I will be the hunter,
And you all can be the deer,
I’ll make you all scream and run in fear.

With the fire burning inside,
I ruled the dark side…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deschler Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 11:53 PM
In response to your reply below... Your poem placed 4th in my "Tales From The Darkside" contest.
Malicious Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Oh sooo cool :) Thanks
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 7:47 PM
this is still on my favorite poetry list. congratulations
Deschler Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 7:12 PM
A very powerful piece written from deep within the dark side... Great work, Valkyrie! Congrats on the win!
Malicious Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:24 PM
what win are you talking about? I haven't been on all week could you tell me, thanks
Vaso Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 6:45 PM
Loved this poem!
Malicious Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 7:08 PM
Read some of my other poems! You will like them even more! What do you rate this poem?
Lamoureux Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 9:52 AM
You might appreciate my poem called "Ripping" I enjoyed reading your work this morning. Writing is an excellent release and way to explore our feelings.
Laurie Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:40 PM
G'day Valkyrie... I certainly hope Valkyrie that this is a creative poem and you haven't gone through these emotions. You certainly have taken us into a dark side - well done - Lindsay
Malicious Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 9:08 PM
I have fallen here before but I got back out I stayed there for 2 years
A   Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:22 AM
I've fallen deep once too many times when on the dark side. I've done things I hate. I was a hunter, made everyone my prey. I know how it is to be fed up, burning inside. Trusting the ones we love, when they are probably worst than us. This is a good write Valkyrie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Malicious Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:48 PM
If you liked this you should like The Hunt
A  Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:05 AM
on another note. Valkryie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A  Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Wow, that's what I'm talking about. Now let me warn you, I'm no deer. In your woods, I'm the beast that dwells inside your head. LOL, Valkryie this poem a BAD A$$. Love it. :) I don't favorite many new poems. However, I love the dark side of this poem. I rate this poem with a 10. But were only allowed to rate a 7 the highest. SKAT LOVE
Malicious Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:48 PM
If you liked this you should like The Hunt
Worthy Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 9:24 PM
The darkest poem I've ever read
Malicious Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:49 PM
If you liked this you should like The Hunt
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