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The Dark Poet

The racist hides his views beneath his wit. A mask he hopes will hide his darker side once slipped his vision of future revealed. Bards darker side laid bare for all to see. No humour hidden in such dark expression. just hatred there, within the writers pen. Your prejudices have no place in poetry. release your inherent humanity. 1st ever go at blank verse, Iambic pentameter, lines 3 and 7 have an extra syllable which I believe is allowed . please tell me if not correct as never done before comp entry 11052016

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Date: 5/12/2016 2:32:00 AM
Hi Stephen... powerful statement, "your prejudices have no place in poetry"
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Date: 5/12/2016 3:41:00 AM
wrote it after reading a poem on here , made me want to reply poetry was my chosen method of reply lol stephen x

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