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The Dark Legend of Haunted Road

There are roads that seem inviting in the light of day Only to cast its eerie shadows when the sun begins to go down Engraving a revealing legend after the darkness has given way To the blood curdling horror that once terrorized an innocent town The legend says that years ago a terrible event took place When a patient known to be psychopathic escaped the institution The doctors notified the police who immediately gave chase Though disappointed they became after finding no resolution On one Halloween night, screams of murder were heard by Haunted Road Now, no one ever dares to enter those woods where the tragedies took place Some have sworn that they still hear the screams within suffering echoes Still see the trail of blood stained puddles that mark his evil trace It is here that he and his victim's spirits may forever hide Where voices of the dead lead you to a darkened cabin in the woods They cannot escape the horror of the way in which they died Only the brave hearted would dare to go where this cabin stood A few trick or treaters decided to dare themselves to enter Haunted Road They convinced themselves that this would end up being just a thrill Little did they know that evil was waiting for them when they chose to go The ghost of the psychopath, eager to commit his next kill They walked along slowly, barely breathing, and listening to the sound Of another pair of feet behind them, dragging heavily on the pavement All the kids stopped with their hearts pounding, only to see nothing around Just the moonlight, a howling wind, and scattered leaves, twisted and bent A dense fog soon began to fill the air, giving them more of an eerie feel Still, they proceeded to walk to where they planned to be A run down cabin slowly came into focus, reminding them that the legend is real It was then they decided to turn back around quickly Standing behind them was the killer's ghost, grinning from ear to ear His red glowing eyes could not hide his psychotic, bloody thirst The trick or treaters ran to the cabin, thinking, it's time to face our fear As they approached the door, one said, "okay, now you go first" One by one the trick or treaters tried quietly to lead the way with regret Though their footsteps creaked the floor boards of the old wooden floor It began to thunder and lightning showing the theme in silhouette Then all of a sudden they heard the slamming of the cabin door It was locked, there was no escape, they were trapped for certain In this abandoned place where the victim's bodies were stored Then near the corner something stirred like a blowing white curtain Their eyes grew wide with terror, this occurrence couldn't be ignored Out from the darkened shadows he came into sight His eyes glowing red, his breath smelled of death Suddenly, he grabbed hold of one of the trick or treaters that night While the others tried to break free, out of breath The cabin door was broken open, they ran through, and heard a scream From the captured boy in evil's clutches, with his costume now torn The others were relieved to finally find a way out of this bad dream They were too afraid to help their friend, and a new legend was born The two trick or treaters were shaking in their warm beds Traumatized about the horror they faced from a dark legend They couldn't believe that one of their friends was actually dead Left them both wondering if this is really the end They yawned, and tried to get up, but their hands were tied Still in the cabin, they had not escaped this living nightmare As the killer came closer and closer, the young kids just cried Knowing that their lives would be ended right then and there Written by: Gail Angel Doyle & Kelly Deschler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/7/2015 9:50:00 AM
Wowed! This is quite the tale.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/9/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rick. It was fun to write this story with Gail and do something a little out of the ordinary for Halloween. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/12/2014 5:47:00 AM
A great colaboration by two great poets. Belated Congratulations Kelly and Gail on your fine win.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/15/2014 11:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maurice. I really enjoyed working on this poem with Gail, and I'm sure that she will appreciate your kind congrats, too!
Date: 11/6/2014 12:14:00 PM
- I'm a little late ..... But, I will congratulate you with a 3rd place Kelly and Gail - a great winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/11/2014 1:39:00 AM
It's nice to see you here, Anne-Lise. Thank you for stopping by. Both Gail and I appreciate the kind congrats! :)
Date: 11/5/2014 3:29:00 PM
Glad to be back with merited congratulations on your win in Diane's contest! hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/11/2014 1:20:00 AM
Thank you for bringing along such kind words with your return. I appreciate it very much, Paul. Hugs!
Date: 11/4/2014 10:40:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on this awesome write with Gail....hugs Tim
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/9/2014 12:06:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. We appreciate your kind comments so much! Hugs!
Date: 11/4/2014 7:08:00 PM
The two of you did an amazing scary story here Kelly. Give me creepy chills. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/8/2014 11:53:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda. We do appreciate your nice comments and kind congrats!
Date: 11/4/2014 1:36:00 PM
Brilliantly penned collaboration Gail and Kelly. many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/8/2014 5:51:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind comments, Jan. We appreciate them so much! Hugs :)
Date: 11/4/2014 1:22:00 PM
You created a lot of suspense, Kelly and Gail. I loved the story told in verse. Congratulations on your win!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/8/2014 1:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments and for our placement in your contest. We appreciate it so much, Diane!
Date: 10/28/2014 12:04:00 AM
Compelling Kelly. A real horror poem. Love and best wishes.))) RAJAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/3/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much! I'm happy that you liked our Halloween poem, and I am sure that Gail will appreciate your great comments, as well.
Date: 10/22/2014 3:43:00 AM
Wow!! You two sure know how to get the adrenalin working!! A long write that managed to keep my attention from beginning to end. Wonder who's next on the killer's list! gl for the contest; Diane should like this one. hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/27/2014 2:39:00 AM
Gail and I share a love of Halloween and for all things scary, so it was great to write this story with her! I'm so glad that you read it through and enjoyed it to the very end.... We really appreciate your wonderful comments, Paul. Thank you so much!
Date: 10/11/2014 5:19:00 PM
Just found this awesome write! You guys did so great with this collaboration. Bravoooooooooo!!!! Superb 7 from me....
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/15/2014 3:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert! Both Gail and I really appreciate your kind comments. We had a lot of fun working on this Halloween story!
Date: 10/11/2014 4:47:00 AM
spine tingling and so well scribed, gail and kelly..horror at its best!... spellbinding!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/15/2014 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette. We're glad you enjoyed this Halloween poem of ours! Hugs from the both of us :)
Date: 10/10/2014 8:57:00 PM
They escaped a nightmare only to find terror in captured flesh. Dead or alive spirit can kill! Great sense of entrapment and danger Gail and Kelly...J.A.B.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/15/2014 12:59:00 AM
What we thought was just a dream can turn out to be a real nightmare!... Thank you, Justin. Both Gail and I appreciate your great comments. We had so much fun writing this poem together!
Date: 10/10/2014 9:03:00 AM
After reading this amazing poetry,, it is me who is now haunted,,well it will stay around for a long time,,that's for sure...excellent literature from you both...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/15/2014 12:11:00 AM
I hope that our poem didn't give you too many nightmares, Harry!... Thank you for your wonderful comments. We appreciate them so much!
Date: 10/9/2014 2:19:00 AM
Excellent. Exciting write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2014 11:52:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi. Both Gail and I appreciate your nice comments!
Date: 10/8/2014 6:13:00 PM
Good scary surprise ending..Reads like winning material to me..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2014 1:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. Both Gail and I appreciate your kind comments! We had a lot of fun writing this scary story!
Date: 10/8/2014 2:15:00 AM
beautifully crafted excellent pen kelly and gail really enjoyed reading
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2014 1:24:00 AM
We're so glad you enjoyed our poem, Liam. Your kind comments meant so much to us. Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/7/2014 3:46:00 PM
oh my it had a very tragic ending for them all it turns out! WEll, you two have concocted a great rhyming halloween story and I am sure this will do well for the contest. GReat collaborating!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2014 1:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! We decided that a tragic ending would be much scarier than a happy one, for a Halloween story. Gail and I had a lot of fun writing this poem together, and we are planning to do more collaborations in the future!
Date: 10/7/2014 4:45:00 AM
- Exciting from beginning to end ...... - A Halloween night I will not experience in real life :)) - A skilled writing from you Kelly & Gail ! - Have a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2014 12:28:00 AM
I hope that no one will ever experience a Halloween night like this!.... Thank you for your kind words, Anne-Lise. Both Gail and I appreciate them so much!.... Have a great day :)
Date: 10/7/2014 3:50:00 AM
COOL YET CREEPY :-) loved it kelly :-)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/14/2014 12:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Hina. Both Gail and I are glad you enjoyed our poem :)
Date: 10/5/2014 11:46:00 PM
That was last Halloween, I am cured now!!!! Loved this haunting write!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/11/2014 6:09:00 PM
LOL :) ....I'm happy that you enjoyed our poem, Arthur. It really was a lot of fun to write this with Gail!

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