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The flickering, dreamy firelight, does a sultry dance, Upon the walls of cozy evening, at autumn's arrival. The fading sun left its memory, the crackling flames; And bluebird sings sunshine in lush, scented tropics. The shadows are in rhythm, with the whirling snow, On the edge of chill November, flying by my window. In the joy of swift, vivid seasons, blooms are coming, For when nature's not singing, it's sweetly humming.

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Date: 2/22/2023 8:33:00 AM
Ebvelyn, this is a poem of marvelous description and love of life. For me, it has a total message of resilience! Thank you! God bless you!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/22/2023 5:29:00 PM
It is a pleasure to know you found this poem meaningful, Sally. Thank you for your inspiring words. Have a lovely evening. :)
Date: 2/21/2023 11:50:00 AM
"blooms are coming, For when nature's not singing, it's sweetly humming." Perfect! Hot cocoa, classical music in the background, and someone dear to cuddle with. Love it!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/21/2023 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, Joe. I think that's a very nice scenario. :)
Date: 2/21/2023 1:13:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Keeps you cosy too.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/21/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you very much. :)
Date: 2/20/2023 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful, I imagine the poem being read by an open fireplace!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/21/2023 7:24:00 AM
That's a lovely thought. Thank you, Aysha. :)
Date: 2/20/2023 8:49:00 PM
This is gorgeous, Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2023 9:31:00 PM
I appreciate your compliment very much, Andrea.

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