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The Dance of Spring

The Dance of Spring
Flower fairies love to dance 
When Spring brings budding romance
Midst vivid floral display 
In their element they grace the day.

Cute princesses of the ball
They dance from dawn till nightfall
Flitting flower to flower 
Fairies possess a superpower.

Dressed up in the hue and scent
Of blossoms they represent
Flower fairies dance and sing
For the fascination of the Spring.
21st March 2022
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Contest: Lind30 Rhyme
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Judged : 13th April 2022
Received - N/A

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Re-entered for the new contest - 9th October 2022

Your Second Chance 2nd Submission: Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Christuraj Alex Date: 10/17/2022 8:03:00 PM Very picturesque scenes beautifully brought out. Congratulations! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/17/2022 8:05:00 PM Thank you Christuraj, I’m very grateful for your encouraging comments… Belle

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/17/2022 12:05:00 PM Just enchanting Belle - the magic of the flower garden on full display through your creative pen! Sending the blessings of the autumn garden season! Congratulations to you for your win! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/17/2022 6:05:00 PM Thank you so much Sam and blessings of the autumn season to you too… Belle

Sotto Poet Date: 10/16/2022 9:10:00 AM You have my heartfelt congratulations on winning my contest, Belle. You have written a remarkable poem that is built with many various levels of beauty. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/16/2022 2:27:00 PM Thank you Sotto, bless you for the comments on this poem I wrote and for my win in your contest, I’m delighted… Belle

Panagiota Romios Date: 5/4/2022 11:55:00 AM Hi Val. Really enjoyed the combination of spring and fairies. Plus the stunning imagery. Yours, Pangoe Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/9/2022 4:31:00 PM Thank you Pangie very much… Belle

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/1/2022 6:21:00 AM Flower fairies, they sound so lovely dear friend, I enjoyed your poem today, have a great day :) Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 4/24/2022 8:42:00 PM Thank you Mystic Rose, sorry this is belated but here’s cheers to great days always… Belle :)

Sally Eslinger Date: 3/29/2022 11:46:00 AM Belle! So delightful is this dance of words in a smooth, musicl flow of images. I love the flower fairies. A different one for each growing thing in nature. Your pen here lends descriptive imagery and inner music to Spring’s forest and garden. Bravo! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/29/2022 4:51:00 PM Thank you very much Sally, I so appreciate your positive response… Belle

Debra L Brown Date: 3/24/2022 11:06:00 AM Belle, I love the flower fairies. This is so adorable. Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/25/2022 11:30:00 AM I love them too Debra, thank you and bless you… Belle

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/23/2022 8:23:00 PM Hi I think you have a very beautiful mind that enables you to create such a gorgeous poem best wishes Pangie Romios Your Prop Twin Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/25/2022 11:28:00 AM Thank you my prop twin Pangie, I appreciate that sincerely… Belle

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/22/2022 9:39:00 PM How sweet this is, Belle! Lovely. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/23/2022 7:21:00 AM Thank you very much Andrea… Belle

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/21/2022 12:04:00 PM And a beautiful season it is too Belle, it's most welcome. Hope you're keeping well and Alan is doing OK. Tom Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/21/2022 5:46:00 PM Beautiful the season of Spring is, thank you Tom. I’m as well as can be in the circumstances, Alan is very slowly regaining some strength… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/21/2022 10:56:00 AM What an exquisite poem, I love fairy poems, I would like to believe they exist! Beautiful poem Belle, Hugs blessings, Jenifer. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/21/2022 5:41:00 PM Hi Jennifer, I adore fairy poems too and have believed fairies exist all of my life through. Thank you with love from me to you. Hugs, Belle

Sotto Poet Date: 3/21/2022 10:51:00 AM I really like the hues and the symbolism in this masterpiece. Belle, your wording is just great. Best of luck in the contest, and have a wonderful Monday. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/21/2022 5:38:00 PM Hi Sotto, thank you those words mean so much and for your best wishes bless you… Belle

Silent One Date: 3/21/2022 10:06:00 AM Omg this is so awesome.. I love the colours and the imagery... and the use of words is jut brilliant.. you have a great use of light alliteration and assonance.. I hope this one is top of the list as its brilliant. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/21/2022 10:17:00 AM Thank you so much Silent One you have just made my day, I really do appreciate your kind words… Belle