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The Dance of Spring Flower fairies love to dance When Spring brings budding romance Midst vivid floral display In their element they grace the day. Cute princesses of the ball They dance from dawn till nightfall Flitting flower to flower Fairies possess a superpower. Dressed up in the hue and scent Of blossoms they represent Flower fairies dance and sing For the fascination of the Spring. 21st March 2022 * * * Contest: Lind30 Rhyme Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke Judged : 13th April 2022 Received - N/A * * * Re-entered for the new contest - 9th October 2022 Your Second Chance 2nd Submission: Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/17/2022 8:03:00 PM

Very picturesque scenes beautifully brought out. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/17/2022 8:05:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj, I’m very grateful for your encouraging comments… Belle

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/17/2022 12:05:00 PM

Just enchanting Belle - the magic of the flower garden on full display through your creative pen! Sending the blessings of the autumn garden season! Congratulations to you for your win!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/17/2022 6:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam and blessings of the autumn season to you too… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2022 9:10:00 AM

You have my heartfelt congratulations on winning my contest, Belle. You have written a remarkable poem that is built with many various levels of beauty.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/16/2022 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, bless you for the comments on this poem I wrote and for my win in your contest, I’m delighted… Belle

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/4/2022 11:55:00 AM

Hi Val. Really enjoyed the combination of spring and fairies. Plus the stunning imagery. Yours, Pangoe

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/9/2022 4:31:00 PM

Thank you Pangie very much… Belle

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/1/2022 6:21:00 AM

Flower fairies, they sound so lovely dear friend, I enjoyed your poem today, have a great day :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2022 8:42:00 PM

Thank you Mystic Rose, sorry this is belated but here’s cheers to great days always… Belle :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 3/29/2022 11:46:00 AM

Belle! So delightful is this dance of words in a smooth, musicl flow of images. I love the flower fairies. A different one for each growing thing in nature. Your pen here lends descriptive imagery and inner music to Spring’s forest and garden. Bravo!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/29/2022 4:51:00 PM

Thank you very much Sally, I so appreciate your positive response… Belle

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/24/2022 11:06:00 AM

Belle, I love the flower fairies. This is so adorable. Blessings ~ Debra

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/25/2022 11:30:00 AM

I love them too Debra, thank you and bless you… Belle

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/23/2022 8:23:00 PM

Hi I think you have a very beautiful mind that enables you to create such a gorgeous poem best wishes Pangie Romios Your Prop Twin

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/25/2022 11:28:00 AM

Thank you my prop twin Pangie, I appreciate that sincerely… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2022 9:39:00 PM

How sweet this is, Belle! Lovely.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/23/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea… Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/21/2022 12:04:00 PM

And a beautiful season it is too Belle, it's most welcome. Hope you're keeping well and Alan is doing OK. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/21/2022 5:46:00 PM

Beautiful the season of Spring is, thank you Tom. I’m as well as can be in the circumstances, Alan is very slowly regaining some strength… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/21/2022 10:56:00 AM

What an exquisite poem, I love fairy poems, I would like to believe they exist! Beautiful poem Belle, Hugs blessings, Jenifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/21/2022 5:41:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, I adore fairy poems too and have believed fairies exist all of my life through. Thank you with love from me to you. Hugs, Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2022 10:51:00 AM

I really like the hues and the symbolism in this masterpiece. Belle, your wording is just great. Best of luck in the contest, and have a wonderful Monday.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/21/2022 5:38:00 PM

Hi Sotto, thank you those words mean so much and for your best wishes bless you… Belle

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 10:06:00 AM

Omg this is so awesome.. I love the colours and the imagery... and the use of words is jut brilliant.. you have a great use of light alliteration and assonance.. I hope this one is top of the list as its brilliant.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/21/2022 10:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One you have just made my day, I really do appreciate your kind words… Belle