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The Dance of Dances Will You Take My Hand

My eyes gaze into twin hollow sockets. Behind it, a trail leading over the hill to a sepulcher. A ghastly cloaked apparition offers its hand. Bones intertwined with my flesh fingers. Waltzing, twisting, flora maelstrom around us. Verdant lush at our feet, hue shifts as we sweep. Beneath the umbra of silhouettes, a flurry of yellow. Behind us, grass blades turn to ashes, dissipating. Footfalls a tempest burst our past to wasteland. As we dance, hips sway our life on this gray line. Jump, orchestra piano solo, arms extend, violin string slips. Partner vanishes, I drop into a glass sarcophagus. Lid slams, scream as dirt pours in, shrieks are snuffed.You will find me in the garden, back turned. Windstorm of petals, I’m in the center there. I turn and offer you my hand, and the howling goes quiet. Snarl like grin spreads my countenance. Skin slowly peels, curls, and flakes away. Muscle, sinew, flesh are torn and ripped into the fray. Worms, maggots, beetles all engulf my frame. Meld, fuse, and forge into my black cloak For now, I am death incarnate. To lead you to your mausoleum crypt. “Are you ready to dance with me?”

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Date: 7/25/2024 1:19:00 PM
This is really dark, just dark...You may find it weird, but this speaks to me: Worms, maggots, beetles all engulf my frame" felt that, felt low, too.
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Paige Hind
Date: 7/25/2024 1:38:00 PM
Coming from my place, it is low- maybe not for you. Yes, it's beautiful.
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Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/25/2024 1:26:00 PM
Shouldn’t feel low though, this is beautiful, to me this is gorgeous… Js
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Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/25/2024 1:24:00 PM
This is one of my very first poems… My first macabre poem
Date: 6/19/2024 6:41:00 PM
Dear Beatrix, your dark and vivid imagery brings the dance with death to vibrant life. Your richly worded verse creates an intense, dire atmosphere and a sense of dread permeates your verse. I especially enjoyed your creative, poetic use of language like "flora maelstrom" and "Windstorm of petals". Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Beatrix Macabre
Date: 6/22/2024 1:27:00 AM
Thank you I am very happy you enjoyed it

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