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The Dance of Dances

For Miranda Hawley's Dance Of...Contest Cleared from mistakes past ,he greets love reclaimed His ardor fierce as dreams untethered swing. Moments of anger, jealousy now tamed: Again, night's rhapsodies begin to sing. His woman alights, dressed in bridal lace... Her lover honoring a misty glance Petal- kissed within their own world's embrace Where flamed waltz glides...on dips of shadow- dance. And male fingers cascade down through her waist Bronzed hands tracing her every hourglass curve, Enamored by swaggers of season's wait; No other movement , their footsteps could swerve. It would take whirls of lifetime to explain This unrehearsed dance beneath moonlit rain.

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Date: 7/10/2024 7:53:00 PM
The tail of two lovers, yes is the dance of dances! Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 7/9/2024 4:32:00 AM
dance of dance it is. amazing write. Congratulations dear poet. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/8/2024 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Delighted to see your poem on the winners' list. Sara K
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Date: 6/17/2024 4:54:00 PM
Oh my, my! Endearingly romantic…Absolutely delightful.
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Date: 6/17/2024 8:39:00 AM
Very romantic dance. . the best one in life, especially if it lasts!
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Date: 6/16/2024 7:07:00 AM
A lovely romantic piece Nette. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 6/15/2024 1:50:00 PM
Unrehersed dancing Nette' no better kind to my Mind.' Yet ?? I bet the rain was unreheresed? too Mind you.' Not that i do.) Apart from when reading your writes that is.' As i am following Your thought train, in the main..Yet not on the Whole 'pon my soul' i hope i made all plain.??
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Date: 6/15/2024 7:13:00 AM
Creative use of words dear nette, what stood out for me is the line “ Where flamed waltz glides...on dips of shadow- dance.” how beautifully youv woven synonymous descriptions there and the flow of this is beautiful! Pleasure reading your work! You have a way with words. Sending you light always
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Date: 6/15/2024 2:03:00 PM
Well she would have a way with Words..A wordy way indeed I Say.) And there are other flowery?? If not to say fancy wordy comments ink.' Its when Poets get to paper.' And start to Consumate their think.' Which leads to un-restrain-ed acts hypothasis and more.' I wish I'd Never opened that bottle.' I should have paddled back to shore!!
Date: 6/14/2024 12:45:00 PM
Interesting format for your sonnet.. It flows and rhymes really well..
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Date: 6/14/2024 7:46:00 AM
Your sonnet is beautiful, Nette. Your dance, set to beautiful music, goes from a sorrowful waltz to a passionate spin as you go from delighted to grief-stricken
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Date: 6/14/2024 6:21:00 AM
Nette, a beautifully penned Sonnet poem, I love your words and the romantic nature of it, well done, hugs
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Date: 6/14/2024 5:34:00 AM
Beautifully written piece of romance Nette. I can see it in my mind. Kudos
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