The Dance

She twirls gracefully
And returns to him.
He grips her hand
To pull her closer.
Her back arches
As she leans backward,
Her long, silky hair
Surrendering to gravity.
His hold on her is strong,
And in his arms she feels safe,
Protected by a love stronger than any other.
She comes back up
And twirls again,
Bissfully happy
And light on her feet.
He pulls her up for a lift
And shows her off
To the empty room around them.
As her feet touch the ground again,
The final notes of the song play out,
And the dance ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tapley Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 5:50 PM
I loved the line where he picked her up and showed her off. That was great! You made me feel like I was there dancing with these two lovers. Beautiful poem.
Orschell Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Beautiful written...Love the little details you put in it. -Destiny
Brown Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:44 AM
I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Katy. Love, Carol
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