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The Dance

Gently flowing to the music Intensely aware of his touch Caressing her waist admiringly Like he always felt as such ~~~ Dreamily whispering in her ear As they greedily listened with hope For even more of these feelings Which promised they would elope Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster June 11, 2021
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. A romantic write and picture. I had 2 girlfriends do that. One still had a huge wedding. Have a blessed day...............
Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Beautiful Words. Congratulations!
Brul Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 8:19 PM
So elegant and romantic! The creativity of your pen is boundless dear Gina..Warm wishes.
Canerdy Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 8:06 PM
Lovely poem, sweet sentiments, Gina. Janice
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Beautifully romantic Gina, I love it!
Mcconnell Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Lovely pen Gina, showing nice rhyme and flow too. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Hankins Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Nice job, Gina. I enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes!
Sands Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Very nice Rhyme Regina. This flows well :)
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