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Gently flowing to the music Intensely aware of his touch Caressing her waist admiringly Like he always felt as such ~~~ Dreamily whispering in her ear As they greedily listened with hope For even more of these feelings Which promised they would elope Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster June 11, 2021

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Date: 7/13/2021 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A romantic write and picture. I had 2 girlfriends do that. One still had a huge wedding. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 7/12/2021 3:39:00 AM
Beautiful Words. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/12/2021 8:19:00 PM
So elegant and romantic! The creativity of your pen is boundless dear Gina..Warm wishes.
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Date: 6/12/2021 8:06:00 PM
Lovely poem, sweet sentiments, Gina. Janice
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Date: 6/11/2021 3:08:00 PM
Beautifully romantic Gina, I love it!
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Date: 6/11/2021 1:29:00 PM
Lovely pen Gina, showing nice rhyme and flow too. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 6/11/2021 12:17:00 PM
Nice job, Gina. I enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes!
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Date: 6/11/2021 10:04:00 AM
Very nice Rhyme Regina. This flows well :)
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