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The Dagger of Love

When a boy’s life lacks tragedy He must make himself a man, So he takes on the weight of love To see if he can still stand. I will imagine her telling me To blame it on the night. I will imagine her telling me The mood is just right. You can never fall this deep Only for the fun Love A dangerous place to be Without a gun. Love is kind of like ice Melting patiently; Mentally bound by emotion, Not knowing that we’re free. In the play among us I was in the balcony, I Looked at blurred expressions A vague reality. She noticed the wrinkle in my palm She no longer held my hand I called it the dagger of love The ultimate revenge on man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/10/2016 3:56:00 PM
This poem is the male perspective, I just posted a poem on 'break up' from the female perspective, what irony. Enjoyed reading the male perspective :).
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Ty Okon
Date: 10/12/2016 4:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading my poem Karen. I did not even consider what perspective this was, but thanks for the feedback. www.ukotyrawnokon.com

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