The Dagger of Life

Oh, this life has pierced my soul many times,
        thrust me into bottomless pits;
impaled and bleeding-   this girl has plummeted down,
falling, tumbling, immersed 'til I am sinking.
      Life has thrown the dagger,
                                the plunge is deep.

Oh, death has left me so gutted and lost,
        I have wept forlorn and grieving;
have asked why, why has this destiny been written,
I want an eraser-  I will change my own fate.
      Why life must you always,
                                eviscerate.

Oh, life sometimes you have sent me adrift,
        sent me on journey's misleading;
given me false, flawed and corrupt information,
erroneous-  leaving me hallucinating.
      Life you have given facts
                               so fallacious.

Oh, life you have left me in a whirlwind,
        on swirling, twisting gauzy threads;
but instead of down I am spiraling on up,
there is this cyclone-   in the mazes of my mind.
      I hold a tendril in, 
                               a vortex twirl.

Oh, life amaze and show me the beauty,
        tease me with the puzzle of you;
rattle, ruffle, and entangle your mystery,
this girl-  is ready to be bemused and bedazzled.
      Life I am awestruck,
                               bewilder me.

Oh, life I have this great thirsty yearning,
        do not torture and torment me;
for I want only to enchant you with my charm.
I forgive you for the bottomless pit journey.
      Life I am in the mood,
                               to tantalize.

Oh, life you may find me an odd, weird girl,
         I like things just a tad bizarre;
yes I can be strange and a little eccentric,
for example-  I like wearing old vintage clothes.
      Life I am questioning,
                               and curious. 

Oh, life make me a sweet crimson flower,
        flame-colored deep in a garden;
dress me up in fury and flaming red petals,
I wish to be-   a fallen lady just growing.
      Life make me a beauty,
                             dressed in scarlet.

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June 14, 2018

Poetry/Verse/The Dagger of Life
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1030-996-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge 7
sponsor, John Hamilton

First  Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/2/2018 1:40:00 PM
Such an outstanding poem, Constance. Congratulations on your 1st Place Podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/1/2018 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on a finely woven piece, BW (DH). Viv x
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Date: 6/30/2018 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A beautiful well-written poem brilliantly using all 8 words. :)
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Date: 6/30/2018 2:47:00 AM
Great write and win BW..Congrats
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:34:00 PM
Congrats Constance on a shared first place, well done!
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