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The Daffodils’ Song to Nesting Robins

In spring's caress, daffodils hum low, Robins weave nests as rain begins to flow. Gentle drops fall, a lullaby so sweet, In rhythms soft, where earth and sky meet. Daffodils' song, ever so brief in time, Fades beneath rain's melodious chime. Yet in this moment, life anew is blessed, As robins toil at crafting their soft nest. Warm spring rain bathes each petal, leaf, wing, A cradle for life that blooms in spring. Robins and flowers in harmony dwell, Under rain's enchanting, soothing spell. And with each drop, a symphony so fine, Nature's own lullaby, by design divine. In joyous dance, where fleeting moments nest, Spring weaves its magic, earth is dressed.

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Date: 3/27/2024 5:27:00 PM
Each line of this poem is exquisite, well constructed, and blending so smoothly in to the next...that's a rare talent. Your imagery was vivid and delightful to read as was your smooth rhyme scheme. You've got it all in this poem, Don! Seriously, I love your work! Sara PS I especially liked: Daffodils' song, ever so brief in time, Fades beneath rain's melodious chime.
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/28/2024 12:01:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much. I am pleased and honored that you appreciate my poetry. I have been writing a long time. I learn something from each poem I write; some more than others. Cheers, Don
Date: 3/27/2024 4:40:00 PM
Don your poem is excellent, and as I read your words I see a picture. I like the line "cradle of life."
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/28/2024 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, I am most appreciative. Don
Date: 3/27/2024 5:18:00 AM
I just transplanted some wild daffodils yesterday. They were beautiful in contrast to the black foundation of the house. Your poem is chock full of Springness (I just coined a new word) Daniel
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