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The Cycle of Life I walk this golden path in fall’s cool breeze as autumn afternoon’s warm setting sun is shining brightly through the crimson trees, but growing shadows signal day is done. A bright array of leaves the autumn paints, her palette filled with amber, rust and red; she paints the vivid colors sans constraints throughout the hills and forests so widespread. And though the season’s colors bring us cheer, the falling leaves an omen for us all that old man winter surely must be near; upon these barren branches snow will fall. And thus the cycle of our lives proceeds and moves ahead till springtime sprouts her seeds.
November 24, 2019

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Date: 9/2/2021 9:41:00 AM
Love the imagery created from your words John. You write so tenderly and beautifully, it always makes me feel calm. Hugs, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/3/2021 2:27:00 AM
I have always found a walk through the forest to be calming, I’m glad I was able to capture that feeling with my words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Emilia, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 12/17/2019 5:54:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, my friend! Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, John - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
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Date: 12/17/2019 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Greg, I appreciate it. John
Date: 12/4/2019 6:01:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet. Thank you John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/4/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Fred, I appreciate your kind words and visit. John
Date: 12/1/2019 4:28:00 PM
The first one I read by you in kind return:) Beautiful! Fall of life! My first language is Russian and my verse is rather of common sense/humor that poetically deviced. So I truly admire yours. Will read more ??
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Date: 12/1/2019 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Margarita, I appreciate your thoughts and visit. I must say I enjoyed reading your “common sense” verse. I plan on reading more. John
Date: 12/1/2019 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations John! Your poem has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. Due to the exacting syllable counts and perfect rhyme requirements of this form, this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/2/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thanks, Emile, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 11/27/2019 12:37:00 PM
- A golden picture of a fantastic autumn ... the autumn has become wet and brown here now ... a beautiful sonnet, John :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/27/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/25/2019 8:55:00 PM
I wish I could write with so much vision and wonder. The older one gets the faster the cycle seems to rotate and the beauty appears to be even more apparent. Thank you. Shirley
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/26/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Shirley. The cycles of the seasons are passing by rapidly for me as well. All the best my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 11/25/2019 7:06:00 AM
Whether nature or human, we all go through a cycle of life - however, most of the vegetation of the world bounces back in Spring or Summer, we don't unfortunately and nor do animals (we have old man time) that stops our cycle. Loved this poem John. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/25/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Jenn, very true what your say, we don't live on but our seed does through our descendants and thus the cycle of life continues. Have a great week my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 11/24/2019 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful John pure and simply beautiful!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/25/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Bren, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 11/24/2019 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts take me there. Each and Every Season I caress. With Thankfulness. Indeed I do. The photo you have chosen, matches your words perfectly my dear friend. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/25/2019 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I always enjoy hearing your thoughts and comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it. All the best my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 11/24/2019 7:40:00 PM
Here's to those Spring-time seeds, John!... Masterfully penned sonnet. Warm wishes, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/25/2019 4:22:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/24/2019 4:11:00 PM
Well done John, now I'm tempted to do one, a sonnet that is. Enjoyed, love the rhyme and flow of this piece!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/24/2019 5:39:00 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/24/2019 2:10:00 PM
wonderfully penned sonnet, you seem to handle them with ease... :) hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/24/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sandy, i appreciate the kind words. Hugs, John
Date: 11/24/2019 10:17:00 AM
Beautifully done. Intimidated, I have not yet attempted to write a sonnet, this makes me want to. xomo
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/24/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, Mo. I think your haiku and senryus say much more than my sonnets in much fewer words. Hugs, John
Date: 11/24/2019 9:19:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet John, and hopefully our cycle will take us through many more seasons to come. Good luck. Tom.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/24/2019 10:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom, I appreciate it. John

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