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The Cycle of Life

The Cycle of Life I walk this golden path in fall’s cool breeze as autumn afternoon’s warm setting sun is shining brightly through the crimson trees, but growing shadows signal day is done. A bright array of leaves the autumn paints, her palette filled with amber, rust and red; she paints the vivid colors sans constraints throughout the hills and forests so widespread. And though the season’s colors bring us cheer, the falling leaves an omen for us all that old man winter surely must be near; upon these barren branches snow will fall. And thus the cycle of our lives proceeds and moves ahead till springtime sprouts her seeds.
November 24, 2019
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James Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Love the imagery created from your words John. You write so tenderly and beautifully, it always makes me feel calm. Hugs, Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 2:27 AM
I have always found a walk through the forest to be calming, I’m glad I was able to capture that feeling with my words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Emilia, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Barden Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:54 AM
Wonderful imagery, my friend! Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, John - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Gondolf Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Greg, I appreciate it. John
Jagenberg Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Beautiful sonnet. Thank you John.
Gondolf Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Thank you, Fred, I appreciate your kind words and visit. John
Lillico  Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 4:28 PM
The first one I read by you in kind return:) Beautiful! Fall of life! My first language is Russian and my verse is rather of common sense/humor that poetically deviced. So I truly admire yours. Will read more ??
Gondolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Margarita, I appreciate your thoughts and visit. I must say I enjoyed reading your “common sense” verse. I plan on reading more. John
Pinet Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations John! Your poem has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. Due to the exacting syllable counts and perfect rhyme requirements of this form, this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Gondolf Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Thanks, Emile, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 12:37 PM
- A golden picture of a fantastic autumn ... the autumn has become wet and brown here now ... a beautiful sonnet, John :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gondolf Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. John
Hawkins Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:55 PM
I wish I could write with so much vision and wonder. The older one gets the faster the cycle seems to rotate and the beauty appears to be even more apparent. Thank you. Shirley
Gondolf Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Shirley. The cycles of the seasons are passing by rapidly for me as well. All the best my friend. Hugs, John
Proxenos Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Whether nature or human, we all go through a cycle of life - however, most of the vegetation of the world bounces back in Spring or Summer, we don't unfortunately and nor do animals (we have old man time) that stops our cycle. Loved this poem John. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Gondolf Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Jenn, very true what your say, we don't live on but our seed does through our descendants and thus the cycle of life continues. Have a great week my dear friend. Hugs, John
Chiri Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:55 PM
Beautiful John pure and simply beautiful!;)
Gondolf Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Thank you, Bren, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts take me there. Each and Every Season I caress. With Thankfulness. Indeed I do. The photo you have chosen, matches your words perfectly my dear friend. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 4:40 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I always enjoy hearing your thoughts and comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it. All the best my dear friend. Hugs, John
Wolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Here's to those Spring-time seeds, John!... Masterfully penned sonnet. Warm wishes, Gershon
Gondolf Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 4:22 AM
Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate it. John
Hamilton Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 4:11 PM
Well done John, now I'm tempted to do one, a sonnet that is. Enjoyed, love the rhyme and flow of this piece!
Gondolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. John
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 2:10 PM
wonderfully penned sonnet, you seem to handle them with ease... :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 5:32 PM
Thank you, Sandy, i appreciate the kind words. Hugs, John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Beautifully done. Intimidated, I have not yet attempted to write a sonnet, this makes me want to. xomo
Gondolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:53 AM
Thank you, Mo. I think your haiku and senryus say much more than my sonnets in much fewer words. Hugs, John
Cunningham Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Wonderful sonnet John, and hopefully our cycle will take us through many more seasons to come. Good luck. Tom.
Gondolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Thanks so much, Tom, I appreciate it. John
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