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THE CUTTING EDGE* salt and salt assault their wrists can’t resist the attack, the zip their skates sizzle on the salty ice sniffervescent** cold and fresh unresistant chained back to back in escapades hearts a-beating threatening to give them away so they turn a-way and away ‘til an I love you is dropped onto the ice like a lady’s lacy handkerchief the olympians trace a myriad of hearts on the transparent rink the rush of applause the comeuppance of audience*** — loves pink-glazed cheeks 4/30/2021 *The Cutting Edge - 1992 Movie tribute **Sniffervescent - The effervescence of sniffing the ice, the enjoyment of being on the ice ***comeuppance - I’ve used here as a reversal of its original meaning - the crowd comes to its feet, instead of penalty, a reward.

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Date: 5/4/2021 7:54:00 AM
I love your new words; they need to be incorporated into every dictionary Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/1/2021 1:28:00 AM
I have not seen the film, I'm not much in movies as I prefer the series. Ice skating however is a favourite sport with me. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2021 5:36:00 AM
Thank you! Love to watch ice skating. Hugs :)
Date: 4/30/2021 4:46:00 PM
My favorite part of the Olympics! So well said, and dazzling. Brilliant write!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 4/30/2021 2:07:00 PM
I love to watch the daring, yet softly graceful skaters. Your poem tells their story perfectly.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Ann! Fun to watch the couple skate!
Date: 4/30/2021 9:07:00 AM
Now that's a 'comeuppance' we can applaud! ~ I Skater
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 9:44:00 AM
Yay! Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 4/30/2021 8:29:00 AM
Gorgeous Kim ! I love watching ice skaters :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thank you! Me too!

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