The Curtain Rises

the curtain rises after fifteen minutes - coffee cures the fog 8/28/2018

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Date: 8/30/2018 12:28:00 PM

Oh, it does indeed. Well penned!

Date: 8/30/2018 8:06:00 AM

A coffee haiku-what a unique idea, Kim. Enjoyed very much ~Warren :)

Date: 8/30/2018 2:26:00 AM

Ha ha, nice one, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2018 7:22:00 AM

Thanks, Jo!

Date: 8/29/2018 3:59:00 PM

I like this a lot Kim. A surprise ending in a strict very short form. Well done! A FAV for me! Have a good one!!...Pat

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Pat! :)

Date: 8/28/2018 2:56:00 PM

Coffee always cures the fog. :) Really nice Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2018 10:27:00 PM

Thanks, Chris!

Date: 8/28/2018 2:06:00 PM

ah, so true! without my morning cup, that fog would last way longer than 15 minutes! nice one, kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2018 10:28:00 PM

LOL! I’m sure!

Date: 8/28/2018 7:34:00 AM

A lot of reasons to think of! Intriguing dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2018 10:29:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!