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The Curse of Ambition

The well is dry, the lemon squeezed Creativity and effort’s final drop spilled The fountain of youth, now a dustbowl Empty promises, what a show! End of my tether, I feel the strain Pushing forward, in endless pain Commitment to self, my only drive To never quit, to always survive But exhaustion looms, like a dark cloud Before my collapse, I ask ‘am I proud?’ I'll push on, till the bitter end I’ll surmount this mound Like Bukowski wrote, "the race goes on" Though my legs feel like they weigh a ton I'll keep running, till the end of time For success is the most difficult climb.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/21/2023 10:56:00 PM
I have recently been learning about the power of rest to success. Interesting poem suggesting self awareness but perhaps don't be too driven to beat yourself up in the process of things.
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David Chen
Date: 3/19/2023 12:51:00 PM
Yep, totally true. I've been taking a lot more time to recenter myself after writing this one. Thank you again for your insightful comment.

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