The Curse and Grace of Longing

Stare beyond her shoulder, long for more,
Capacity is reached, you pour more.

Hitchhiker smiles broadly, climbing in,
Seeking new horizons, it bore more.

Cross the bridge tomorrow, pull the blinds
Sewing up the lesion, it tore more.

Rubbing out the damn spot to conceal,
Sun succumbs to darkness, there’s four more.

Reflect on no return, feel time’s breath,
Transgressions stain your hands, but you’re more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Irwin Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Thanks very much Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:25 AM
I found this to be an intriguing piece, great use of the form.
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Way to go with your winning work..Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Luke, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~
Harper Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Luke, excellent ghazal, more is such a useful word in this form, it leads many places, congratulations on your win.
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 8:49 PM
great job with this form...congrats on your win :)
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 3:09 AM
Congratulations on the win, Luke
Trifiatis Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Thought provoking! Makes one think more! Thank you!
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