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The Curse

At the sound of the knock, Mac opened the door, And there on the porch stood his friend LeBours. “I came at your call as fast as I dare.” “You’re here at last, that’s all I care.” Mac paused to clear this throat and said: “I think tonight I shall be dead.” “I think what you need to clear your mind Is a smoke and a drink of your finest wine.” With that, his friend stepped through the door, And what could he do but follow LeBours. “The curse of my family is burned in the wall. Read it, please, it will tell you all.” “It’s really quite a simple verse.” They slid back the panel and read the curse: An ancient crime that reeks with mettle. An ancient score too late to settle. A friend had helped the life that flew So now who dies is one and two. “The point, I fear, I cannot see….” “It means there’s death for you and me!” “I asked you here so we can fight And keep a watch throughout the night.” “Dear Mac,” said Le Bours, “fear not your ghost. Bring us a drink and we’ll have a toast.” So saying, he settled himself in a chair And watched the shadows that gathered there. Mac walked slowly from the room And disappeared in the musty gloom. He carried the drinks back through the door And couldn’t believe what he saw on the floor: He downed a glass to clear his head, For across the room, LeBours lay dead. The tray and wine crashed to the floor, Mac was needed in his role no more. Now the room grew still and dim For late last night, it had gotten him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/23/2020 8:41:00 PM
Awesome! I think it was the right decision "to poem it."
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Jean Bush
Date: 2/23/2020 8:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eric.
Date: 10/17/2018 12:24:00 AM
Downed a glass to clear his head......brilliant.
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Jean Bush
Date: 10/17/2018 9:51:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Greig. I have plenty of head clearing concoctions myself;)
Date: 9/16/2018 11:23:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. It is such a great story, held my interest from start to finish. Nicely told, kind of Edgar Allen like.
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Jean Bush
Date: 9/17/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, I already feel at home here. I've been an Edgar Allen Poe kinda girl since childhood.
Date: 9/7/2018 5:25:00 AM
Loved reading this very interesting and most creative piece my friend. You did such an excellent job spinning this tale. A fav... I like very good dark poetry.
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Jean Bush
Date: 9/7/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. The darker the better:)
Date: 9/1/2018 4:50:00 PM
This was originally supposed to be a short story but couldn't get it together. So I poemed it.
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