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The Crow

A baby crow cowers in the street, trying to hide from kids from dogs from well-meaning people. Its parents fret noisily, its mother raps her beak sharply, angrily, furiously on the telephone wire. A war party of crows gathers in the giant firs to protect the tiny one but how? Cars go by, slowing, swerving. When I pick it up we are both shaking. Black forms descend on murderous wings and I believe them. I hold the living child carefully out so all the midnight eyes can see and this is a moment of disbelief. I carry her across the street and set her under a bush and leave her for her people. The giant firs grow quiet. Night falls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/18/2018 9:15:00 AM
That's a very good different descriptive story-write Bleak Willow, Thank you for sharing !
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Date: 6/20/2018 6:48:00 AM
Ah nice piece! Enjoyed. Bird lover, corvid admirer myself. I've picked up one such fledgling, thwarting a cat's plans. Gorgeous blue eyes eh? xomo
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Bleak Willow
Date: 6/20/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thanks! These are definitely intelligent creatures, and don't seem to hold a grudge against me for picking up and moving their little one.

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