The Crossing

Across 
a sea of discontent
the old man struggles.
Years of patient rebuke
fall in a broken wave.
The tide pool eddies
on the edge of his
tired soul.  
A promise of  
rest hangs,
floating in
a sweet cloud
of soft
emptiness.   
He reaches within 
himself a place of balance;
found twixt 
the old and new,
          the good and bad, 
                    the here and there.
Then he was no more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Well thought out with mounting tension and powerful phrasing... Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Davey Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Very powerful write, thank you I enjoyed it very much!
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