The Crooning Dove

Effigy formed of inert dust, 
Inhaled the divine pulse, vile vine  
Infused with worth and dignity. 
I'm not! I'm not! Fallen from grace; 
I frown at my rueful bungle.

Sad to strut, my honor swishes 
Shame; dark crusted conscience 
Hangs on me; keeps paling my worth
Till I yell at Christ's open arms  
For return of the gone glory, 
So dear, the present, a shadow.

Years in the fire, self-refining,
Yielded scum, dross, a dull shine. 
If I should have another chance, 
Revert to the noble state I'd lost, 
My heart could be tanned rainbow.

A dove cranes on a perch, offset 
Against the blue, croons in the wind, 
Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani? 
Yet I battle with baneful pride,   
Scorn the grace, the courting nocturne.
No end to my nice now, I wow.
Quite unequalled, I'll ever be. 

The bell tolls for others, each time  
Softer; the whir of a whirling world.  
The sun keeps her scoot; stars, their stroll.
Summer smiles; winter whines, sulks.
Time etches against my proud form. 

The bell! Sounds like tolling closer—
Jangling, ruffling... nettling.
Yet my pride... my pride sticks, 
Lances the chance to begin again.
	

© 2015 Celestine S. Ikwuamaesi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/8/2016 9:16:00 PM
CELESTINE, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2016 2:41:00 AM
Love to read your comment. Thanks.
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