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The Creation of Man

Astonishing power poised, For the creature on the hilltop. A sublime...robust arm reaches, To a feebly...outstretched drooping limb. A curve of force, Outlines the arrival of God...as a cloud. Opposed to the weary expressions of life, And human lassitude of dust. A lifeless hand rests on a youthful knee, The body bent by its own weight, The head and neck sunken within the shoulders, A child-like face awaits glorious manifestation. Upon the shoulders of the Cherubs, The Creator grows nearer. His fingertip extends a bit further. Within an inch from one another, The life-giving hand descends. To the recumbent body of Man: Mortal flesh...awakened by the divine breath. ________________________________ Inspired by The Creation of Man/Adam By Michelangelo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/23/2010 7:55:00 AM
Beautifully written with a hallowed ambiance.
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Date: 1/7/2010 1:35:00 PM
Michelangelo was great. He must have been strong to chisel that solid rock. You have described his work well. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful expressions of the Creation Raul.. just yesterday I posted Genesis 3 regarding the Creation of man also.. when the Spirit of God flows it infiltrates many.. thankxxx for sharing this piece.. blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie.
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:03:00 PM
Awesome and inspiring, knew what art work you were depicting right away. Thanks for sharing and happy new year! Caroline.
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:01:00 PM
very pretty, creative--thanks for your comments today. Hope you are well and full of inspiration.
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:15:00 AM
This is breath-taking, divine poetry. And what great inspiration is this Michelangelo masterpiece. Another beauty from your pen, Raul. Love, Carrie
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