The Crack Above

Written: August 25, 2025 ********* There was a crack in the ceiling. Above the lamp, above the silence, a crack— thin as a vein, but pulsing with something devious. At night, I stared upward, its jagged line, such a question I couldn’t answer. The plaster flaked as aged skin, and dust fell in slow confession. When she climbed the ladder, she traced it with a fingertip, then with pencil, then with tape— measuring the damage as if it might reveal a diagnosis. She patched it gently, not to erase, but to soothe. Later, she painted it the same soft ivory as before. Not to hide it— but to let it rest. And now, when I look up, I perceive nothing. Or rather, I perceive everything it once held.
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Date: 8/30/2025 8:06:00 PM
This is deep. In my favs
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Date: 8/26/2025 5:19:00 AM
- Life cracks sometimes... there will always be a scar... but we move on... trying to forget :) - A deep poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 8/26/2025 1:44:00 AM
Wonder what that crack represents. Great poem that can be visual or metaphorical. Pleasure reading it.
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Date: 8/25/2025 6:37:00 PM
the crack could be a metaphor for love or something else, this is a clever poem and well crafted poem, thanks poet
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Date: 8/25/2025 5:43:00 PM
wow, the ending of your poem left me breathless with a subtle truth. Truly a brilliant poem. wishing you a pleasant Monday evening, Texas hugs, Sara
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