The Coven

Why brought they flowers to a witch's grave
With greening foliage and color bursts,
With drab, dark pigments that white lilies save?
Nail tight the coffin,  Lest we all be cursed.

Atop the new grave, the bouquet was laid.
By morn the flowers have withered to black.
Wafting of chants on wind's organ is played,
While gale of rebirth is calling her back.

The scent of perfume has become hot steam
Where heat of the day swelters the foul ground.
Escape impossible! So it would seem.
Yet casket's empty and witch is unfound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 8:13 AM
I wrote a poem about a witch but never posted it. It is too long. I loved your poem, though, which I seem to have missed. It is short but to the point.
Greenhough Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Thank you for visiting.
Leach Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Wow how interesting witches and empty coffins. Scary, scary when they're on the prowl.
Greenhough Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 3:45 PM
Thank you and ...Happy Halloween.
George Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 10:46 PM
Casket is empty. This single line is enough to send shudders through the whole body. The bouquet laid on the grave turned to black and the scent of perfume changed into hot steam. What a spooky tale, Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 11:37 PM
As intended. Thank you for commenting.
Williams Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Oh a witch one. Very imaginative Hilda and nicely rhymed. I guess the reader's mind will go into a 'riot' imagining all sorts or spooky scenarios, wondering where she'll pop up next. Scaryeeeee. Cheers Maria
Greenhough Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 6:21 AM
The witch is probably home watching t.v. and looking forward to voting next month. Thanks for reading.
Radice Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 7:18 AM
There needs to be a follow up to this. Where the heck did the witch go? Your second stanza was a standout for me Hilda. Great write. Cheers - Gary
Greenhough Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 7:44 AM
No follow up. This is a poem, not a story. I allow the reader the chance to ruminate on an ending. Thank you for enjoying my poem.
Jones Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 2:17 PM
Great rhymes this had me engaged until the end!
Greenhough Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 3:48 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.
DiMino Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 8:53 AM
A FAV for sure! Love it! She no longer webs the grounds, rides a broom with eerie, swishing sounds; yet, some chilly nights, throughout the towns...her name not spoken, fearing injurious, cold presence, yet abounds.
Greenhough Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Thank you very much. I appreciate the fav. It is obvious that I'm looking forward to Halloween. Enjoy the scary holiday.
Bayles Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Very haunting.
Greenhough Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Yes, it was haunting. I'm still brushing the dirt off my clothes. (Cackle). I'm glad it was interesting.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:01 AM
The ground and whole enchilada is cursed. A doozy
Greenhough Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Thank you. Happy Halloween.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 2:19 PM
eeek this is very spooky Hilda, ideal for this time of year! hugs jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Just 24 days until Halloween. Thank you for your comment.
M  Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Haha Hilda l love this....scary spooky write! Debx
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Thank you . Glad you like it.
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 10:26 PM
LOL!! Very scary and fun, in the spirit of Halloween! Thanks for sharing this enjoyable poem, sure to cause laughter. :D
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 12:56 AM
I'm glad you like it. I look forward to Halloween every year. Enjoy the holiday.
Crandall Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Wow, great spooky Halloween poem! Nailing down the coffin won't do any good!
Greenhough Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 9:02 PM
Yep. Halloween will be here before long. Thanks for reading.
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