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The Couple Who Lived In 4-E

Behind caution tape, I stand in the shade watching a wrecking ball, tethered to sway And soon with a gasp from the crowd standing by A piece of the past is ready to die I am seeing a lifetime, as it falls to the ground the old tenement house, on Avery Street For years it was home, to folks across town Rarely do people now straddle it's shores Where the root-buckled sidewalks lead up to the doors And feet skipped over the cracks, with swift daily chores All the chalked hopscotch lines have since washed away along with laughter and the gold of the day Summertime colors have withered and fled Into bruised, battered bricks, of memories bled Now, forsaken, this dethroned queen With broken limbs and shattered eyes of shards of glass, and broken lives Still haunt the northwest wing Thick layers of dust, cover the limpid leaves of an old silk rose, within a vase and reminds the gloom of dime store trips when the passing lives, that used to be were alive with simple certainty A curtain, torn, hangs by a thread and shivers, laced within the wind A haven, built, of brick and clay Defaced, disgraced, red-brick decay Each story told, each life it held Now crumbles with each stone, once laid There were some who still remember, well The ones who lived above the rim By whom you could set the clock By footsteps walked on wooden stairs Who made this place a home Now far away, the gossips say "Their health had failed, such hell to pay For now it seems to live each day Someone has to tell them... When to eat, when to dress and when to bathe" People had watched them come and go It was always with hand in hand... Their music was heard between the cracks Mozart, Bach, Glenn Miller bands They had lived here forty years or more Or so the legend goes.... No one really knows for sure, but know it was for years... But now a flower in a vase Is covered dust to dust The lights turned off, no sigh, no trace... with windows black, and lyrics lost The wave that came, went back to sea Like the hopes that fade away Tomorrow's dreams have come and gone to leave a winter's song And is the only thing that holds the years From waning into none.... ___________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/14/2014 5:07:00 AM
Fine ode and congrats on the fine win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:22:00 PM
CARRIE, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt Caliri's "Empty Apartment" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2010 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your super win in the Empty Apt. contest with this excellent entry .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 12/18/2010 10:16:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Eamon
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations, my very, very talented friend. A well deserved win. I am so proud of Carrie :)
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:40:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner, Carrie. Congratulations!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:23:00 AM
wow, carrie, a real treat… hats off to you for the award!! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:00:00 AM
Hi Carrie.Congratulations for this great piece . Sad but with so many lasting images. Their music was heard between the floorboards; Now a flower withers in it's vase; Where tomorrow's dreams have come and gone. Those graphic lines made the hairs stand on the back of my neck. Thanking you for your welcome comment. Luck, peace and happiness to you and yours. Eamon
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Date: 11/26/2010 5:50:00 PM
I can tell now that Matt is going to have a Very tough time judging this contest-- I've read amazing ones and this definitely belongs to that group, Carrie :)! How sad indeed when children do that to their aging parents-- you've woven such a sad reality here but so beautifully & vividly written-- I also think your repeating line is quite effective in emphasizing that sadness-- hugs & belated Happy Thanksgiving to you :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:32:00 PM
Carrie....very moving poetry.... awesome talent my friend! thanks for the congrats and happy thanksgiving! jimbo
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Date: 11/24/2010 6:56:00 PM
I had chills thinking of the seniors being told when to eat, dress and bathe. Who cares for elders who have no children? I wonder what the future holds for us. I love the way you described the atmosphere in the neighborhood and the last verse where the hopes and dreams are carried out to sea on the tides of time. Excellent entry for the contest, Carrie! Best wishes for success as well as a Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 6:35:00 PM
Wow! Carrie, now this one is impressive,, all the ones I read are views of themselves.. Now i like the way you write the emptiness of another space being missed by others... Enjoyed your poem, and have a wonderful blessed Thanksgiving day,. always,..P.D.
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:43:00 PM
You sure do paint a vivid picture with words. I see the scene you discribe as if it were dispayed on my TV screen or hanging in an art gallery. ANd I know the couple you refer to as if they were real people in my almost real world. Nicely written. I love your free verse with subtle rhyming strewn all about. Nice technique. Joe
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Date: 11/24/2010 3:01:00 AM
Ow that is life. .they lived a happy one it seems. .they loved together and rest together,and now 'the flower wither in a vase. .touching,and deep!
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:51:00 PM
You have captured it here, haven't you, Carrie. No doubt about it. This poem is a success within itself. Masterful and drawing. Top notch, Carrie.
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