Janice Canerdy Poet Limerick

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                               August 5, 2026, entered in Margarita Lillico's Get a Room contest

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The Couple at the Movie

                 
They revealed things that mortified me,
an abundance of flesh, clothing-free.
     “Get a room, y’all!” I pled.         
      They proceeded instead   
showing passion with great energy!

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Sara Kendrick September 1, 2026 at 6:51 AM Back with congratulations to you on your winner. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K. Janice Canerdy September 5, 2026 at 6:25 AM Thanks a million, Sara. Janice

Valsa George August 29, 2026 at 12:20 AM I have seen similar 'unholy' scenes. Public parading of sex is abominable. Belated Congratulations dear Janice. Janice Canerdy September 5, 2026 at 6:06 AM Thanks so much, Valsa! Janice😀

Joanna Daniel August 22, 2026 at 9:03 AM Belated congrats on a great win, Janice😊 Janice Canerdy September 5, 2026 at 6:05 AM Thanks so much, Joanna. Janice

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2026 at 11:56 PM Congrats on a well deserved win Janice Canerdy August 18, 2026 at 1:06 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Nette Onclaud August 17, 2026 at 8:49 PM enjoyed this hilarious lim, janice...huge congrats on your win! Janice Canerdy August 18, 2026 at 1:06 PM Thanks SO much, Nette. Janice

Sara Kendrick August 17, 2026 at 4:30 PM Seems like this one might have been written for a contest, if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2026 at 1:15 AM Great job here, Janice. I like yours very much 👏 Janice Canerdy August 17, 2026 at 1:02 PM Thanks for the positive feedback, Andrea! Janice

Sotto Poet August 14, 2026 at 3:58 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved win in this contest with this outstanding limerick, Janice. Janice Canerdy August 17, 2026 at 1:03 PM Thanks ever so much, Sotto Poet. You are very supportive of other poets! Janice

Tom Cunningham August 5, 2026 at 10:30 AM Lol,I bet you nearly choked on your popcorn Janice. Good luck in the contest. Tom🌹 Janice Canerdy August 5, 2026 at 1:06 PM I'm sure I would have. (I made it up.) Thanks, Tom! Janice

Daniel Henry Rodgers August 5, 2026 at 10:25 AM Dear Janice, this gave me a good laugh. You capture that moment perfectly, when you’re just trying to enjoy a movie, and suddenly the row in front of you becomes its own unexpected feature presentation. A fun, lively write. Blessings, Daniel Janice Canerdy August 5, 2026 at 1:07 PM I love this response, Daniel. Thanks a million! Janice