The County Fair - Palindrome

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At the county fair when the time keeper went toot. Little Natan riding a ewe bolted out of the shoot Keeping his weight level was quite a fight Mom and dad watched as he hung on with all his might. Many couldn’t have done what he did. Eight seconds is good stats for a five year old kid He knew he had a reder rump. When the rope fell through the terret, off of The ewe he did jump He said without a selles you shouldn’t ride Don’t be a kook and hurt your backend hide. This boy is an amazing tot. He’s looking for a new gig that’s hot Riding down a river on a kayak might be fun. A racecar Might do, but never another ewe! 5/12/2018 toot, Natan, ewe, level, mom, dad, did, stats, reder, terret, selles, kook, tot, gig, kayak, racecar

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Date: 5/13/2018 3:05:00 PM
Delightful story impressively written dear, Eve! Happy mother's day!
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:17:00 PM
what a charming write the palindromes used were not forced... lovely piece, eve..huggs
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Date: 5/13/2018 11:43:00 AM
Such a fun tender write, Eve. Good luck in the contest. Happy Mother's Day!
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Date: 5/13/2018 9:23:00 AM
Eve, you used the Palindromes so well! Love your little story! I know your poem will do well in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2018 6:50:00 AM
A very cute story wrapped in these chosen words..the story flows naturally...I think you aced the contest Eve..best of luck.
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Date: 5/13/2018 4:08:00 AM
What a fun poem Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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