The Costume Ballet of Pleasant Grove

One day in early April, I’ll be given a surprise. Old Man Winter will have barely trudged away. I’ll drive up to my house and before my eyes, Spring will have returned in bright array - with my front yard trees a part of her costume ballet. The buds on my pear tree will become florets, prettily unfurled a creamy white. My plum trees in bloom will be two coquettes posed charmingly to the pear tree’s right and bejeweled in amethysts - to my delight! The costume ballet is a gorgeous thing to view. There is no dance, but rather you will see a movement from block to block of every hue displayed in early April most gracefully by my own and every other costumed tree. (My city is famous for its beautiful trees; hence the name Pleasant Grove.) Written Feb. 2, 2012 for Francine Roberts' english quintain a spring day Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/11/2015 11:44:00 AM
This title from 2012 looked interesting, and lo, I haven't read it. Quite an imaginative harbinger of things to come. You be great. Love, daver
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:31:00 PM
A lovely description of your neighborhood, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:46:00 PM
And a very pretty town it must be. Congratultions Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:42:00 PM
After I read your beautiful poem I closed my eyes and was visiting you in Pleasant Grove, had a cup of coffee with you too :) Lovely poem, dear Andrea! Let it be spring!!! Love, iolanda
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:33:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a well deserved win for this breathtaking beauty of a write on Spring.. what a glorious title luv..
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:40:00 AM
Yes loved this first time , still do congrats xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 10:58:00 PM
congrats on another great win Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:58:00 PM
What a lovely piece, Andrea. I prefer the trees to flowers in my garden
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Date: 2/4/2012 3:20:00 PM
Lovely analogy! Sounds very beautiful! I love this :) hopefully francine will too!
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:29:00 AM
Sory, Andrea, it seems I misunderstood your husband's heath problem. Will continue to keep him in prayer. Loved your Costume Ballet of Pleasant Grove. It must be nice to have a full spring, we don't get much of one in this country. Good luck with Francine Roberts' A Spring Day Poetry Contest. Love, Maureen
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Date: 2/3/2012 8:33:00 PM
Nice description of environment, loved much always, bl
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Date: 2/3/2012 10:01:00 AM
you should see Savanah.
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Date: 2/3/2012 9:05:00 AM
so wonderful to be i,m,ersed in thes lines of happiness .. sounds like much fun in your neck of the woods Andrea.. am working on a contest entry for u now.. great theme.. m,y Withered Rose was writtern for my Daddy but I have entered it in Brian's new contest today luv.. happy weekend.. and good luck in Francine's with this brilliant beauty ..
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Date: 2/3/2012 7:08:00 AM
Just thoguht i'd pop in and say i missed you too :).. and since i'm going to be home..i might be getting here everynow and then to read my wonderful friends,including you,and to post my simple verse..So very lovely is this poem... I love those plum trees and the little florets..almost a heaven garden..
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Date: 2/3/2012 6:52:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Very impressive the idea and presentation..Enjoyed..I know that you are looking forward to spring...Thanks for the kind review of my latest work..I need that uplifting review..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2012 5:26:00 AM
absolutely lovely! good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/3/2012 3:06:00 AM
Ahh! Spring! The time of year when a young man's fancy turns to love. I needed to read a poem such as this to-day. Hope this is a contest winner. Take care and thank-you for reading my recent work, Jancarl
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Date: 2/3/2012 2:52:00 AM
such stunning portrait of spring with your lyrical images, andie... i gotta see this pleasnt grove someday..go for the win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/3/2012 1:36:00 AM
Hi can't wait for spring now with this one, love it especailly the plum trees as two coquettes. BTW never been called Awesome before, I thank you xx
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Date: 2/3/2012 12:59:00 AM
Nice prelude poem for spring Andrea. May your pear and plum trees give you bountiful fruits this year. Good luck in the contest. Dalila
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Date: 2/2/2012 11:42:00 PM
You've just reminded me that I have spring fever. :o( But it has helped me to see these beautiful trees. :o) Aaaahhh...
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Date: 2/2/2012 11:17:00 PM
spring has sprung awhile ago, and blossoms linger here, be awhile fore summers done , cooler than normal here? Australia....thanks mate....
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Date: 2/2/2012 10:28:00 PM
Some lovely imagery for Francine's contest Andrea. Best of luck. You poem carried me into spring.
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