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The Cost of Living

After they have taken everything you still have a stray, unowned patch of sunlight finding its way in and spending a little of its time keeping you company, playing around your feet. The things they discarded on their way out have already broken into bloom and even the empty spaces have become polished pools waiting for the moon to bathe its image in tonight. But don't get too smug. Tomorrow they'll be back with a bill for services rendered by the sun and moon. Then, just when you think that will be the last transaction, they will issue you a bill for each thought you have, calculated on gestation time and its estimated weight. There will be no escape other than to become a ghost incapable of thought, twitching inside one of their computers, lost forever between one and nought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/23/2023 8:07:00 PM
Reminds me of Frank zappa’s dystopian masterpiece, Joe’s Garage. At the end, Joe is locked up, but he’s playing guitar solos in his head that he knows would irritate the executives if they could hear. Watermelons in Easter Hay is surely among the great guitar solos…
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2023 8:20:00 PM
Will need to follow up on your musical references. Thanks Jeff for yr comments. In the meantime have managed to get myself a lead helmet which prevents them detecting the signals...though I keep falling over with the weight. Regards
Date: 2/23/2023 2:01:00 PM
Ooh very emotive of a not too distant dystopian future. Great poem
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2023 3:48:00 PM
Many thanks for your comments. Poem very much follows in the shadows of Auden's landscapes...tried to soften the bleakness with a couple of light brush strokes. Thankyou for reading it. Regards, Paul

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