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yes, I have ... I've had them ... those moments - the deep, desperate, rare moments … "straight-from-a-movie" moments of romance and melancholy, where the violins and violas and cellos pull on your heart … forlorn music, reaching down into your viscera to yank at your soul in tyranny … heart-wrenching moments of exquisite agony, where the core burns, the hairs stand, the eyes close, and you're lost to the consequence … brief, beautiful, gentle instances that you hold for a lifetime, and that hold YOU, (like moonlight holds lovers) - that shine like jewels among the mists of the mundane … oh, how blessed I've been, AND how cursed … for this gift of creativity that so many envy, is but a shadowy facade for the dark, dire truth of the sensitive spirit - we feel deeper, look deeper, wish deeper, love deeper, and ACHE ... deeper … I am thankful for those moments, for they are precious, and they make life, for me, exceptional and profound and abundant, but there is a dear price to pay ... and it comes without music, without breath, without tenderness or warmth, and it comes in the dead ... of night. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, August 8, 2019

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Date: 1/7/2023 8:57:00 PM
Point well made!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2023 7:43:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Kim!
Date: 1/7/2023 6:43:00 AM
"but there is a dear price to pay". It is often said "if ya wanna dance ya gotta pay he piper". Great write Gregory, the beauty and then angst of loves roller coaster.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2023 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, John, I’m so pleased you liked this one, my friend!

Book: Shattered Sighs