The Cost

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yes, I have ...

I've had them ...
those moments -
the deep, desperate, rare moments …
"straight-from-a-movie" moments of
romance and melancholy,
where the violins and
violas and cellos pull on your heart …
forlorn music, reaching down
into your viscera to yank at
your soul in tyranny …
heart-wrenching moments of
exquisite agony,
where the core burns,
the hairs stand, the eyes close,
and you're lost to the consequence …
brief, beautiful, gentle instances
that you hold for a lifetime,
and that hold YOU,
(like moonlight holds lovers) -
that shine like jewels among the
mists of the mundane …
oh, how blessed I've been,
AND how cursed …
for this gift of creativity that so many envy,
is but a shadowy facade for the
dark, dire truth of the sensitive spirit -
we feel deeper, look deeper,
wish deeper, love deeper, and ACHE ...
deeper …
I am thankful for those moments,
for they are precious,
and they make life, for me,
exceptional and profound and abundant,
but there is a dear price to pay ...
and it comes without music,
without breath,
without tenderness or warmth,
and it comes in the
dead ...

of night.






Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, August 8, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/7/2023 8:57:00 PM
Point well made!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2023 7:43:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Kim!
Date: 1/7/2023 6:43:00 AM
"but there is a dear price to pay". It is often said "if ya wanna dance ya gotta pay he piper". Great write Gregory, the beauty and then angst of loves roller coaster.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2023 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, John, I’m so pleased you liked this one, my friend!
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