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The Corner Bar

A man walks into a bar and throws all of his cards on the table his best, his worst, all of his moments and dreams spilling out with him in a pool of blood, tears, vomit, piss, and a laugh, and a stumble, and a moment of angelic grace, when he touches the sky with a bit of fiery wit and a story that proves he's more of a man, than he who walks out with a limp because he hates his own leg, and walks into a bar to throw all of his cards on the table.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/19/2012 11:04:00 AM
I wonder, if perhaps he threw his cards in too soon...but on the other hand, how else this wonderful verse. Cynthia
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Date: 8/16/2012 2:43:00 AM
Interesting... insightful... Nice... Terry
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Date: 8/16/2012 12:54:00 AM
Determination to fight comes out at the end.Good write
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Date: 8/16/2012 12:51:00 AM
Ph- It started out with theme of a joke, but it is quite a thoughtful piece....David
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