The Coppertone Girl

There once was a girl
In the Coppertone ad
And her dog pulled her bathing suit down;
So her pale little butt
Was exposed by the mutt
Though the rest of her body looked brown.

It was harmless and sweet
And offensive to none
So for years it made Coppertone's name;
But society's changed
And for people deranged
What was innocent's not quite the same.

Now the Coppertone girl,
While her doggie still tries
To perform the same stunt he once did,
Looks abashed, but for what?
For this time he had not
Been successful at making his bid.

Though his little teeth nip
At her suit, he cannot
Bare her tush for the whole world to see.
It's a sign of the times
That because of some crimes
What was cute once no longer can be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 8:33 PM
ahhh, so true, so sadly true, Ilene. Clever as always!!
Canerdy Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 6:59 PM
A 7 for this great poem that tells the truth about the changing times! I'm adding this one to my favorites. Janice
Manassian Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Yes, I remember the ad. You wrote about an aspect of societal norms changing well, dear. Hope all is well. hugs
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 3:19 PM
love the witty angle of your work, and a strong ending that makes me look back at young adulthood... very nice, ilene.. huggs
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 3:17 PM
This is very nice...a warm feeling when reading. ;)
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Made me smile Ilene - oh how times have changed!:-) hugs Jan xx
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