The Consolation of Danger

Too slow is the speed of life, 
so we try to outrun avalanches and race sounds, 
flee into roaring tubes of hungry water, 
brave invisible waves in the sky. 

Too barren is the landscape of life, 
so we take shelter in surly jungles and unruly gulfs, 
set out to survive deserts where even memories die, 
trespass peaks reserved for birds and clouds. 

Too bloodless are the aesthetics of life, 
so we declare emotional asylum in the turmoil of music, 
find refuge in the jarring, scarring beauty of poetry, 
ask to be abducted into the haunted wilderness of art. 

Too transactional are the relationships of life, 
so we pawn our souls for the drugs of cults and creeds, 
trust in friends or their imposters,  
risk heartbreak for a few moments when the world spins. 

Too fraught is life with the danger of safety,    
so we seek salvation in a rush of adrenalin, 
or a trickle of madness. 

Empty-handed is no way to leave.  

We’ll hitch a ride on those spikes along that flatline. 

Or be impaled upon them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/7/2018 8:45:00 PM
I was going to show you my favorite parts, but there are gobs of them "Too transactional are the relationships of life, so we pawn our souls for the drugs of cults and creeds, trust in friends or their imposters, risk heartbreak for a few moments when the world spins. Too fraught is life with the danger of safety, so we seek salvation in a rush of adrenalin, or a trickle of madness" really got to me. Well done, my friend. Thank you Bernard.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/8/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thank you very much for dropping by, Caren, and for sharing your kind words. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/4/2018 8:34:00 AM
Pointed pen! Dark realism ;) xomo
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/4/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Maureen. Appreciated :)
Date: 2/4/2018 6:21:00 AM
I second Susan. This is an exceptional piece almost graphically depicting human seek refuge in ways to raise us to a high and escape conditioning and boredom...Maria
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/4/2018 7:41:00 AM
You're too kind, Maria. Thank you :)
Date: 2/3/2018 10:13:00 PM
WOW! Bernard, I think this poem is pure genius. Your title is so compelling and intriguing, then your enthralling and exquisite poem justifies the title in an awe-inspiring way.. Through the ages, we've become so tamed and secure that we create distractions and scenarios to satisfy our need to feel the rush of adrenaline.. Your awesome content is expressed with your fantastic trademark imagery and your last six lines especially are stunning! A superb and breathtaking write. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/3/2018 10:44:00 PM
Susan, again, thank you so much! I was wondering if this is too abstract, but your generous words tell me it's probably okay after all. Really appreciate it! Have a lovely evening! :)
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